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Autumn Spectacle

My green autumn, you goaded me to write. I love the way you sparkle, shake, and hurl. Conquering my mind day and by the night, Always musing about the shorn kiss curl. Let me approach you with a square crowbar. You are more snowy, magnetic, and bright. Light storms whisk the twiglets of October. And autumntime has a quiescent sight. How do I love you? Let me deem the ways. I love your brickle birds, kindling, and leaves. Thinking of your fine brushwood fills my days. My zeal for you is that upbeat reeves. Now I must away with a frozen heart. Memorize my posh terms whilst we're apart.
Written: October 17, 2022 All Hallows' Evening Poetry Contest Sponsored by: craig cornish
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Sands Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:42 PM
Well written. I can see it and feel it :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Creative imagery, that's for sure, Lasaad. Lovely write on autumn.
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October 19, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Will you stop raising the bar Lasaad, esp the square crowbar, incredible imagery with your inimitable nuances and quirks of the English language becoming your very own brand and trademark, outstanding work, cheers David
Baker Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:05 AM
I loved the imagery and the beautiful picture you choose to illustrate your poem, Lasaad. Well written entry for the contest, my dear friend. Good luck! Bill
Poet Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so much, dear, Bill. Appreciate your kind words
Trifiatis Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Magical depiction of Autumn through your exquisite verses, my dearest friend, Lasaa! Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 12:02 PM
This is a gorgeous sonnet, Lasaad. I love it! Blessings, Evelyn
Pandit Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 5:44 AM
Beautiful verse on autumn my friend. Enjoyed the images you convey throughout. Best to you.
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October 18, 2022 at 1:24 AM
Ah Lasaad, you are fast becoming one of the best poets on the soup. A wonderful sonnet worthy of a high placement.
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:29 PM
Lasaad, Autumn does have a beautiful dress. Great verse.
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