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Autumn Sonnet

As day falls into dusk I sit alone, Among the unloved stragglers, waiting still. The fading sun gives way to autumn chill, As I sit waiting, silent as a stone. I feel the crunch of leaves as dry as bone, The children’s laughter silent from the hill, And running, tripping, tumbling, down they spill. I hope that one will claim me for her own. Then lifted up and closely held at last, I make the journey home and find my place. The carving knife gives me the gift of sight, The spoon wipes out the silence of the past. My happy grin shines bright within my face, Illuminated by the candlelight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/10/2019 12:01:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Marylou! You paint a delightful scene in your fine poem..enjoyed! :)
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Date: 12/21/2018 7:49:00 AM
Marylou, you have penned a beautiful poem, so warm and cozy, I love it ~
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Marylou Bondi
Date: 12/21/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for your words...I've just started writing again after many years and your kind words are the best encouragement.
Date: 12/21/2018 7:47:00 AM
A lovely sonnet, Marylou, with a feel of comfort in the silence. The sonnet is such a great form for this kind of writing and you do it well.
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Marylou Bondi
Date: 12/21/2018 9:57:00 AM
Your encouragement and kind words are very much appreciated. Thank you so much.

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