Autumn Royal

Mother Nature makes seasonal progress 
as cold autumnal winds crimson our cheeks,
grandiose trees shed umber morning dress
mackerel skies on fire behind mountain peaks 
reflected in slow running pumpkin creeks,
from long hot humid days to long dark nights
we will now enjoy all autumns delights,

sweet fresh smells in morning amber half light
farmers harvesting cinnamon ripe wheat
migrating birds gather to take long flight,
summer, winter, is autumn bittersweet,
ginger tinged petals of sweet marguerite 
bathed in bright glorious saffron sunlight, 
autumn brings new beginnings and pleasure 
beautiful sights, memories we treasure.

Composed 2nd October 2017.
Contest Autumn rhyme royal.
sponsored by Dale Gregory Cozart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/1/2017 2:09:00 PM
Love all of it...and that line " Mackerel skies on fire behind mountain peaks" is especially good - fine work, Roy! My best regards. :) john
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Date: 11/2/2017 5:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment John,really pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))
Date: 10/7/2017 7:44:00 PM
Utterly gorgeous. I see congrats on it but don't know what placement you got. Anyway, it was well deserved. Congrats.
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Andrea, I am over the moon with my placement in the contest (9th), thanks again for your support. :))
Date: 10/7/2017 1:14:00 AM
Roy - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:00:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations Gregory, really pleased you liked this. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 9:32:00 PM
Roy, a beautiful display of nature! Congrats!
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:46:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations, really appreciated Kim. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 6:34:00 PM
absolutely stunning Roy i adore the imagery and image as Autumn is my favourite season:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan, you are very kind, summer for me though all the seasons have their beauty. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 4:18:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your Autumn poem, Roy, along. I especially like the last two lines! Congrats on your placement on this short list of winners. Sandra
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations Sandra, So pleased for this to be placed, thanks again for your support. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 3:46:00 PM
Roy, congratulations on your impressive poem and placement and I love your image too !
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations, I really appreciate your support. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 3:32:00 PM
My goodness... that was beautiful
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Alesia, so pleased you liked this, thanks again for your support. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 2:13:00 PM
This is lovely with outstanding imagery Roy! Congratulations on your placement! : )
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Date: 10/5/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie for your very kind comment, you are very kind. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Roy, that was a fabulous Rhyme Royal :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Darren, this is encouraging, really pleased with the placement. :))
Date: 10/5/2017 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your 9th Place win! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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Date: 10/5/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Dale, so pleased that you thought this was good enough to be placed. :))
Date: 10/2/2017 7:09:00 PM
Wow Roy, a stunning write. So colorful and the imagery is excellent. Great rhythm, rhyme and glorious lines. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan, kind comments especially from an accomplished poet such as you are really appreciated and encouraging, I can't thank you enough. :))
Date: 10/2/2017 6:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery..well written..best for a win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment, best wishes and your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))
Date: 10/2/2017 6:28:00 PM
Stunning! Stunning poetry; stunning picture. Into my faves.
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:38:00 AM
Wow Thank you so much Sunlite, I feel honoured, thanks for your very kind comment, adding this to your favourites and for your support and encouragement. :))
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