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Autumn Royal

Leaves has bowed to tempting look of the moon Turning into amber or crimson red Fire in the wind has been smoothly hewn As pleasant "hello" tickling cold breeze said The burnt umber earth laughs at being rain fed Laying child bed for pinecones, pumpkin Ah, stage set to mark climb and fall herein Heart pines for him, his love, his argent arm To see moon hung between naked tree trunk Rain of petals swirl down cheek to disarm Me of bearing to stay for long undrunk Everyday i pick up saffron flower Cinnamon sticks and ginger swollen leaves To make autumn present for my lost love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/7/2017 3:27:00 PM
Your use of the competition words is excellantt! I particularly liked " The burnt umber earth laughs at being rainfed.." And " Every day I pick up saffronflower Cinnamon sticks and ginger swollen leaves To make autumn present for my lost love. " Lovely- carry on writing! :-)
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Akshmala Sharma
Date: 10/7/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thank you marine for sharing your love for this poem. sure i will keep on writing and you too....
Date: 9/30/2017 3:27:00 AM
Great rhyme royal! Love this metapohorical description of summer turning into autumn... There are a few spelling errors in the first stanza, but that doesn't diminish the fact that I love this poem :)
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Akshmala Sharma
Date: 9/30/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thank you for your love.i will correct spelling errrors in first stanza.thank you....

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