Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme Royal

Autumn Royal

Admire the lovely hues of nature's glaze
As leaves turn from saffron to crimson red
And fireplace burns fire, an amber blaze
Foretelling winter's snowy days ahead
As kids feast merrily on ginger bread.
Sunny days transition to cooler nights,
As cheering begins when football delights.

Romance embraces vistas of amber trees
Saddened as birds move to warmer weather.
Enjoying cinnamon tea as nights freeze
When pumpkin pie lovers get together,
And splendid scenery soon turns umber
As Halloween costumes roam windy street
Anxious for candy chanting trick or treat.

September 20, 2017
Autumn Royal
Sponsor: Dale Gregory Cozart
Rhyme: ababbcc, dedeeff--10 syllables per line
Checked on poetry soup syllable counter

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Valsa George June 23, 2023 at 9:28 PM All the changes and beauty autumn brings are beautifully brought in your poem."As Halloween costumes roam windy street/ Anxious for candy chanting trick or treat." Once I had occasion to see Halloween festivities in Florida when I visited my sister. Those memories are still green in me. Greatly enjoyed.

Harshita Chaudhary October 29, 2017 at 1:25 AM Well written. Have a wonderful day Vijay Pandit October 29, 2017 at 6:11 AM Thank you Harshita!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2017 at 6:41 PM VERY nicely done, Vijay. I quite love it!! Vijay Pandit September 24, 2017 at 7:02 PM Thank you Andrea!

Roy Pett September 23, 2017 at 7:27 AM Excellent poem Vijay, you are so talented, GL in contest. :)) Vijay Pandit September 23, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thank you Roy for your lovely comments!

Probir Gupta September 22, 2017 at 9:51 PM Beautifully worded images in awesome rhyme ... to read this is to spend a nice time ... Vijay Pandit September 23, 2017 at 5:16 AM Thank you Probir--appreciate your feedback!

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2017 at 5:25 PM You did a wonderful job with this challenge, Vijay. Best wishes in the contest. Vijay Pandit September 22, 2017 at 5:44 PM Thank you Andrea!

Eve Roper September 21, 2017 at 7:53 PM This is very beautiful, Vijay, your pen has painted a beautiful painting. Good luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 9:36 PM Thank you Eve for your thoughtful comments!

Kim Rodrigues September 20, 2017 at 4:44 PM Very nice, Vijay! Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 6:05 PM Thank you Kim!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2017 at 12:42 PM - Beautiful, Vijay - I'm just getting more and more fond of your poems, always a pleasure to read - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 1:26 PM Always such a pleasure to read your feedback--delighted by your visit and your kind comments, Anne-Lise!

John Leong September 20, 2017 at 11:29 AM wonderful! for a brief moment i was transported to a warm, cosy Christmas-sy feeling, with decors and themes; then projected to Halloween in seconds. yes! nice! good one! cheers! Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 1:23 PM So delightful to read your lovely comments John--many thanks!

Heidi Sands September 20, 2017 at 8:13 AM This is perfect Vijay! Very well done and full of fun! :) Good luck in the contest ! Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 9:26 AM Thank you Heidi--love your cheerful comments!

Anisha Dutta September 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM TOO GOOD. Sure to secure a high position I have not tried yet Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thank you Anisha--Look forward to reading your entry soon!

Charlie Smith September 20, 2017 at 7:38 AM You've transitioned us right in to autumn Vijay, beautifully done, best wishes... Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 7:46 AM Thank you Charlie--love your comments!

Russell Sivey September 20, 2017 at 6:08 AM This is wonderfully written my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening and delightful poem this morning! You have delighted me by your skillful nature, writing with colors and all that autumn brings! What a glorious piece Vijay! Great Work!! Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 6:50 AM Thank you Russell for the smile you bring every day--I am so happy to read your comments!

Jan Allison September 20, 2017 at 5:41 AM You wove the words in so beautifully Vijay a most delightful autumnal poem filled with lovely imagery:-) hugs jan xx Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 6:48 AM Delighted by your visit Jan! Thank you for such lovely comments!!