Autumn Romance

A kiss, a breath, a touch of autumn breeze
I can’t see the trees as I gaze upon thee.
Longing for the spirit and love beyond
as harvest moon lights its millions of stars in its pond.

Early morning rendezvous like thieves
we sit together under the flirting leaves.
You smile, I laugh, as spring sprout knew
in your smile, colors are brighter because I love you.

Tease of   golden leaves run with the tune of breeze
across the embrace of emerald green and pensive trees.
Cool and glorious rains that fall blissfully in amber sunrise
Thanksgiving to overflow to the glory beneath the skies.

9/21/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pett Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, absolutely beautiful. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 1:29 PM
Lovely! Congratulations Eve!
S     Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Eve! Beautiful poem! Love a love story :) Best, Judy
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Congrats, Eve.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your nice win.
One Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:40 AM
You created such beautiful imagery in your love poem Eve... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve with this tender and beautiful poem full of lovely lines and imagery. Enjoyed! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 1:38 AM
Another lovely autumn poem Eve! Congratulations on you win! : )
La France Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Eve, a lovely love poem, congratulations on your win !
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations Eve! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:36 AM
Congrats Eve!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations, Eve for your win with such a romantic poem.
Barden Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:34 AM
Very nice, Eve, I enjoyed this very much ... romantic and charming, with a whimsical air and wonderful imagery! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 9:38 PM
Love is mixed in with autumn so well. Lovely images. Blessings for the contest.
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 11:28 PM
Indeed amazing, Eve ... Beautifully done ... A sure win ...
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:50 PM
This is a beautiful autumn romance. I felt apart of it. As i read your poetry. have a nioce evening my friend.
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 5:04 PM
You have painted a beautiful scene, so full of glory and awe, I loved each line of your delightful write! I really enjoyed reading such an amazing poem this afternoon! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Lovely picture of romance--love the words like flirting leaves--and rendezvous like thieves--Best wishes for a win!
Sands Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Very nice. Sweet, Eve! I enjoyed reading this today :)
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