Autumn Reverie

Shifting haze, so slowly trailing
Through wood and field, now veiling
Melancholy skies, holding back the tears
With wild geese flying to meet other years.
Flames of crimson torches come flinging
Leaves on knarled branch swinging; 
Desolate winds rush leaping
Taking flowers to their final sleeping.
In the groaning of the atmosphere
Unfolding sorrows weep with the fading year;
Fields of cluttered stubble are tangled
With rampant weeds, dew drop spangled.
Flocks of birds leave like flying missiles
Over fields of corn and drying thistles;
Then my dream of autumn fades, paling
Through a grandeur all prevailing
When sunset fires light sky and sea
And sink in the breath of serenity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
April 14, 2020 at 12:15 AM
I'm roaming through my favourites poems, and came upon this gem, a handful of poets here on soup were above the rest,,you, elizabeth up there with the best, reading above just reaffirms that. Hope you are keeping well. Stay Safe...
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November 16, 2012 at 4:25 AM
I have placed a new Poem for PD's contest “PINK PINK PINK” and hope you would read it soon. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Elizabeth Wesley
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November 16, 2012 at 4:23 AM
Reading your Poem Elizabeth is always a joy not only in reading your wonderful lines, but also to become a part in that joyous painting. I wonder how you hold so much of wealth and spread, its colors in your sweet and melodious writes. Matchless beauty is overflowing in almost every line of this beauty. "Melancholy skies, holding back the tears, With wild geese flying to meet other years." It is going to be another fav. of mine my friend. Conti. on next.
Austin Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Here's a fine poem I missed. Got it just in time for autumn color. Love, Dave
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Autumn" contest Elizabeth. Love, Carol
May Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 7:52 AM
congrats on a great poem and a great win Elizabeth
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August 23, 2012 at 9:14 PM
Hi Liz,, stopping by checking out a few winners of the week..,, Congratulations with your Autumn's Beauty double beauty. Enjoyed stopping by~ PD
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August 23, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Elizabeth, your poem takes my breath away! Congrats on your amazing win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Arowolo Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 7:40 PM
Beautiful and Nice work,Elizabeth..Smooth rhymes....Congrats on your well deserved win...Kudos to you,dear friend...
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Autumn still is yet to come to spread it's reverie. And now with words so wonderful we'll now know what we'll see. Congrats on your placement Elizabeth. I see you pulled one from the archives. Nice!
Harrington Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Congrats on this wonderful write. Autumn does slow things down and the bright thriving life of summer fades, leaving a peaceful serenity before the bitter cold of winter. Going to my favs. :) Tanya
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August 23, 2012 at 12:05 PM
finally, a shimmering, beauitfully brooding entry that deserves a top win for me, lizzie... warm congrats with lotsa hugggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 1:45 AM
congrats elizabeth on a marvelous write and win for the colorful entry created.. thankxx for all your sweet comments too.. am slowly recovering from a long list of health issues now luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 9:13 PM
wow, LIzzy, have I seen this one yet. It's really gorgeous. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Guzzi Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:06 PM
Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love
Grisetti Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 5:47 PM
A grand reverie you have woven. Congratulations.
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April 29, 2012 at 5:14 PM
Autumn again... marvelous couplet rhyming and brilliant phrasing. you have a true poet's sensibility. BRAVO, Elizabeth! Blessings, Keith P.S. You might enjoy my poem, 'Measures.'
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Elizabeth, This is more than just a pretty poem, it is an artful masterpiece! You are truly a gifted poet. This is a favorite poem, and you are a favorite poet. Blessings, Connie Soupmail
Ball Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 11:30 PM
Beautiful Liz. You paint a lovely picture. God Bless, JB
Robbins Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 9:26 PM
OHHH, another delightful rhyme, I love the nature rhyme and this one is sublime. So many great rhyming lines I can't say which I like the most; these are tops though:flinging-swinging, leaping-sleeping and possibly my favorite, missiles-thistles
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January 5, 2012 at 8:52 AM
A masterpiece indeed!
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January 5, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Wow! Another masterpiece Elizabeth. Most beautifully written, awesome imagery and rhyme. You have so much potential. You are the best! Thank you for sharing!
Ball Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 12:35 PM
A beautiful piece with great description. Loved it. A pleasure to read. God Bless, JB
Minardi Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:02 AM
melancholy skies, holding back the tears... I love this line the most. Always pleasure to read your poem and your comments, Elizabeth. Merry Christmas and happy holiday :)
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December 26, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Great write on Autumn, madame. Isn't it bit too late for Autumn by the way... P.S. Hugs from you are always welcome my dear, and really needed too :)
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