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Autumn Reverie 2

High school football game
cheerleaders tossed night sky chill
rhythmic beat of drums
alumni and students roar
October's homecoming queen

Copyright © Regina Elliott | Year Posted 2023

6th grade7th gradeautumntanka

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November 25, 2023 at 1:16 AM

Regina, Fellow feelings makes us wondrous kind. Congratulations on your podium placement with this layered, nostalgia driven tanka. Excellent narrative and imagery. You are perched slightly above me Enjoy your weekend Howard

November 15, 2023 at 8:41 AM

Very descriptive of those high school years. Thanks for the reminder of those days. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K

November 15, 2023 at 9:08 AM

Thank you so much, Sara. May the warmth and thankful family gathering of the Thanksgiving and Christmas season envelop you & your loved ones. ~

November 11, 2023 at 9:18 PM

Fond memories, you have stirred with your Tanka, Regina. Thanks for the memories! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

November 12, 2023 at 5:41 AM

Thank you so much, Bill. I'm so glad you went down good memory lane with this tanka. Blessings to you and Sara. ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 11, 2023 at 1:18 PM

- A great one, Gina :) - Gl in the contest :) - hugs

November 12, 2023 at 5:39 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. I hope you have a blessed Sunday. ~

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