Bj Legros Kelley Poet Rhyme

Autumn Petals

Petals of memory falling

                                   Upon the yellowed grass

                               Mingled with the autumn leaves

                                 Cool breeze sings of the past

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Valsa George November 30, 2022 at 8:39 PM Let me repeat Line's comment ! Enjoyed your 'beautiful brevity' dear BJ Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 2:02 PM Thank you Valsa! <3

Line Gauthier November 14, 2022 at 7:08 PM delightful brevity ~ Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 2:02 PM Thank you, Line, <3 :)

Deb M November 11, 2022 at 6:35 AM That is so sweet B.J….Debx Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 2:01 PM Thank you Deb <3 :)

Victor Buhagiar November 9, 2022 at 9:18 AM Happy fall songs. Enjoy. Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 2:01 PM :) Thank you Victor :)

Vijay Pandit November 9, 2022 at 5:28 AM Beautiful, metaphoric poem, BJ. Dwelling in autumn's colors. Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 2:01 PM Thank you, my friend, for your visit comment, and kindness to me through this difficult season of loss for my family. You are a blessing Vijay <3 :)

Mike Gentile November 9, 2022 at 4:46 AM BJ, in its natural beauty, you have created Autumn in my mind! Just lovely !! Happy Wednesday xxoo Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 1:57 PM Hi Mike :) Thank you for the visit and your comment, hoping you are well, Happy Sunday! :)

Mystic Rose Rose November 9, 2022 at 4:24 AM There is so much beauty in these luminous lines of yours. Memory has many colors including the vibrant ones of Autumn. Love this, :) Bj Legros Kelley December 11, 2022 at 1:56 PM Thank you, Rose, I'm glad you liked my poem :) <3