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Autumn Petals

Petals of memory falling Upon the yellowed grass Mingled with the autumn leaves Cool breeze sings of the past

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Valsa George

Date: 11/30/2022 8:39:00 PM

Let me repeat Line's comment ! Enjoyed your 'beautiful brevity' dear BJ

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 2:02:00 PM

Thank you Valsa! <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/14/2022 7:08:00 PM

delightful brevity ~

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 2:02:00 PM

Thank you, Line, <3 :)

Deb M

Date: 11/11/2022 6:35:00 AM

That is so sweet B.J….Debx

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Deb <3 :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/9/2022 9:18:00 AM

Happy fall songs. Enjoy.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 2:01:00 PM

:) Thank you Victor :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/9/2022 5:28:00 AM

Beautiful, metaphoric poem, BJ. Dwelling in autumn's colors.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, for your visit comment, and kindness to me through this difficult season of loss for my family. You are a blessing Vijay <3 :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/9/2022 4:46:00 AM

BJ, in its natural beauty, you have created Autumn in my mind! Just lovely !! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 1:57:00 PM

Hi Mike :) Thank you for the visit and your comment, hoping you are well, Happy Sunday! :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/9/2022 4:24:00 AM

There is so much beauty in these luminous lines of yours. Memory has many colors including the vibrant ones of Autumn. Love this, :)

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 12/11/2022 1:56:00 PM

Thank you, Rose, I'm glad you liked my poem :) <3