Beryl Edmonds Poet Haiku

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Written - 25th September 2024

 

autumn perfection- NFC

on autumnal days
leaves dance alike confetti 
upon whirling breeze.

cosy evenings in
growing darker day by day
family bonding.

nights glow in moonlight
stunning stature perfection 
of silhouette trees.

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Karen Jones October 29, 2024 at 4:20 PM This is lovely with great imagery!

Suzette Richards October 12, 2024 at 9:48 PM Some great lines here, Bellie. The imagery is well executed. Su x Beryl Edmonds October 12, 2024 at 10:10 PM Thank you Suzette, you made me laugh as I’m often called Bellie :) x

Sara Kendrick September 30, 2024 at 3:29 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Autumn is well expressed in this work. Sara K Beryl Edmonds September 30, 2024 at 6:23 AM Thank you Sara, I was too late to enter the contest… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar September 30, 2024 at 2:06 AM Perfect haikus. Best for a win. Beryl Edmonds September 30, 2024 at 2:13 AM Thank you so much Victor, your words mean a lot, too late for the contest … Beryl

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 28, 2024 at 8:39 PM A gorgeous set of haikus, Beryl! Very much enjoyed! :) Beryl Edmonds September 29, 2024 at 12:45 AM Thank you very much Evelyn, I’m pleased you enjoyed these Haiku’s… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos September 28, 2024 at 11:37 AM I love tree in every season but your autumn falling leaves which 'dance alike confetti upon whirling breeze' is so vividly depicted your cozy evenings i growing darker days is so beautiful. Terrific Haiku. Hugs, Jennifer. Beryl Edmonds September 28, 2024 at 6:07 PM Thank you so much Jennifer, I love trees in any season too, they never cease to amaze me with their uniqueness and beauty… Hugs in return, Beryl

Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2024 at 1:01 PM Very nice, Beryl! … Stunning stature perfection Of silhouette trees Beryl Edmonds September 26, 2024 at 2:07 PM Thank you Kim, I really love trees, the sjapes the colours and the variety of leaves… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith September 26, 2024 at 12:12 PM I enjoyed reading your 3 Haiku writes. Great Picture... I love this time of the year. Enjoy It.... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away......................... Beryl Edmonds September 26, 2024 at 2:05 PM Thank you Paula, I truly enjoy this time of year, especially the changing colour of trees. Have a lovely blessed poetic day too… Beryl

John Read September 26, 2024 at 8:55 AM That was perfection sister Beryl. Beryl Edmonds September 26, 2024 at 10:19 AM Thank you brother John… Sis Beryl