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Autumn of Abundance

In autumn when the woods are shades of red,
wind scatters the reddish leaves overhead.
Falling seeds fain to heaven's moist rain spreads
to swell the earth, and plump latent seedbed.

Wind scatters the reddish leaves overhead;
sweet kernels longing; to set budding more
to swell the earth, and plump latent seedbed.
Its fruitfulness with ripeness to the core.

Sweet kernels longing, to set budding more;
squirrels bound across trees, hedge-crickets sing.
Its fruitfulness with ripeness to the core,
finches, redpolls, crossbills cache seeds that spring.

Squirrels bound across trees, hedge-crickets sing,
scamper away not seeing where they stir.
Finches, redpolls, crossbills cache seeds that spring
in beauty of nature that comfort her.

Scamper away not seeing where they stir,
falling seeds fain to heaven's moist rain spreads;
in beauty of nature that comfort her,
in autumn when the woods are shades of red.


10/2/2017

For The Poetry Contest: 'WRITE ME A PANTOUM' 
Sponsored By:	Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Salehi Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Lovely poem ..... the imagery is great..
Sivey Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Wow, what beauty you have written within your wondrous write my friend! I love the way you integrated Autumn throughout this write Eve! You have written such an enthralling piece, I loved reading it this morning! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Eve, love your image and your pantoum is enchanting too !
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Lovely lines of wonderful autumn imagery--best for a win Eve!
One Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:14 AM
You do pantoums very well, this one flows well and has lovely imagery...
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:19 AM
Beautiful autumn made more beautiful in the swings of Pantoum refrain so nicely executed ...
Vaso Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:38 PM
Such a wonderful Autumn poem, eve! Hugs
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