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Autumn Moon

melon moon rising
akin to the rising sun— 
In contrast to lapis sky
enchanting lovers
strolling hand in hand on shore.
Moonlight coruscates on sea.


5-6-19


9-7-2017
Moonlight Delight Contest~6th Place~
Sponsored by: Russell Sivey

Best Sedoka - 577-577 ~First Place~
Contest Judged:  6/10/2019 10:05:00 AM
Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Date: 6/11/2019 3:27:00 PM
So nice how you employed that cool word in the end line. Beautiful poetry I'm seeing again. congrats on your win, Connie.
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Date: 6/10/2019 1:45:00 PM
- Dear Connie, once again ... congratulations on your winning poem ... it is still beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:29:00 AM
The moon shall always inspire love. This is such a wonderful write Connie. It is alive. Love's scene, painted so beautiful by your golden pen. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/4/2018 8:34:00 PM
Another lovely, magical poem.
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:22:00 PM
Ooh sedoka, never tried one, and I do enjoy these short forms. Thanks for a grea tread, and bit of inspiration.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/27/2017 3:26:00 AM
You are very welcome Scott....Thank you! : )
Date: 10/10/2017 5:12:00 PM
The moon will forever be an inspiration for beautiful poetry, Connie, such as this one! Glad to be reading this for the second time round:) Regards // paul
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:14:00 AM
Very nice, Connie! I cannot ever recall having knowingly been aware of the word "Coruscate" before...what a lovely word -- and so perfectly adopted here! My very warmest regards, Connie. :) john
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Date: 10/1/2017 10:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem Connie, a worthy winner!
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Date: 9/24/2017 2:13:00 PM
So pretty!
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Date: 9/19/2017 6:47:00 AM
Oh I see that this is a contest winner, so deserving of that Connie, congratulations...Maria xxx
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Date: 9/16/2017 4:04:00 PM
Stunning imagery, gorgeous writing. This is exquisite Connie:) pure joy to read. a fave ..great word "coruscates"! I do enjoy learning from you. thank you.
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Date: 9/13/2017 10:51:00 PM
Beautifully-penned and with such gorgeous imagery, Connie - congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 9/11/2017 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Connie. I can't believe I put in an extra line and did so horribly!
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:42:00 AM
Lovely tribute to the moon. Not surprised it was a contest winner!
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Date: 9/10/2017 6:42:00 AM
You painted such a delightful scene my friend! Brings back my memory of a stroll taken on a beach in Boracay, with my then fiancee, now my wife. A 7 and a fav....
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/30/2017 10:25:00 PM
You are so sweet to fave this little poem Robert. Thank you so much! : )
Date: 9/9/2017 4:03:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/9/2017 2:20:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 6th place, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2017 8:40:00 AM
Congrats!!! my dear friend...beautiful entry as always...Yahoo!!!...^WW^
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/10/2017 5:25:00 PM
Thank you WW. Much appreciated! : )
Date: 9/9/2017 6:27:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Connie (and I learnt a new word!). Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
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Date: 9/9/2017 6:14:00 AM
Congrats Connie!
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:19:00 PM
Hey, there, Connie. you got me to look up a word, Coruscates!! I never heard it before and it's SO fitting. You did a lovely job with this one. (the images are some of the best I have seen)
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Date: 9/8/2017 10:49:00 AM
Lovely imagery Connie. Words do paint a romantic picture. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Janis.
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Date: 9/8/2017 4:55:00 AM
amazing imagery Connie..
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:26:00 AM
- Romantic and beautiful, Connie - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 9:31:00 PM
Beauty and joy hand in hand in your lovely Autumn Moon ... Thank you for liking In My Shirts Your Touch ...
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