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AUTUMN LEAVES

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 23 October 2016, MY PICTURE, (c)

Autumn Leaves

Agonising golden leaves 

On their deathbed, recalling 

Days of glory that have past

Awaiting rebirth!








(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
       24 October 2016


7-7-7-5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Beautiful, my dear poet....Simply beautiful
Y. Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 12:23 AM
Hi Demetrios, You have penned a lovely scene. I liked what I saw-7:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Thank you so much dear, Alexis. So kind of you to visit!
Kannan Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Lovely poem... Beautiful pic...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thank you dearest, Supraja, for your kind visit and comment!
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 7:05 AM
- BEAUTIFUL ! - A 7! - Best wishes for a lovely Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:14 AM
You so generous my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much! Hugs.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:15 AM
WONDERFUL Demetrios:-) the fallen leaves do rejuvenate the earth - oh how I love autumn:-):-)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Wonderful to receive your visit dearest, Jan. Thank you so much. Yes Autumn is lovely!
Gupta Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 5:54 AM
beautiful inkling ... in beautiful words ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:16 AM
You so kind my friend, Probir! Thank you very much!
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:04 AM
Dear DT, Brilliant write. Loved it. A big 7............//hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for your appreciation dear friend, Manmath!
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