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For double acrostic contest

Autumn Leaves




Amber, orange, red, gold  falL
Undergo change from green lifE
Touched by sweet decaying aromA
Undercurrent swirling dance of improV
Marauding chill in the breezE
Nimble corpses, once living thingS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Jones Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:46 AM
Wow what a cool creative acrostic! Well done! I can see why it won!
May Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Congrats on your win Crystol, Very nicely penned
Woods Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 2:14 PM
Tysm! This was a great challenge and I've found new form of poetry I enjoy so much! Xo
Healey Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:13 PM
Hey, Crystol! Congratulations on your winning placement! And what a wonderful coincidence that we both wrote about autumn! Take care, Jim
Woods Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 2:15 PM
That's so cool! Yours is beautiful! Ty for stopping in. Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Autumn Leaves" Double Acrostic write. Have a great day/weekend..............
Woods Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 2:16 PM
Ty Paula, you too! Xo
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Gorgeous. I did mine on autumn too. Just not posted yet. I write a bunch of poems on my weekends when I have time and post maybe one s day during the week. Good luck in this fun. Contest
Woods Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 8:56 PM
Ty! Oh did you? Great minds! :) Il check in with you soon to read it! Good luck to you as well and God bless! Xo
Crandall Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 11:07 AM
I like your last two lines Crystol. I just read how you end up with 5 words per lines. Initially, I thought the same. The result is great!
Woods Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 4:35 PM
Tysm David! I was going to edit it when I figured it out but, yea,I kinda like the simplicity of it! Thank you! Xoxo
Rose  Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 9:30 AM
My favorite time of year dear Crystol, and also my favorite form acrostic. It was wonderful dipping into your words, thanks for stopping by, :)
Woods Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Oh thank YOU! Funny thing...I wrote this for the double acrostic challenge and mistakenly thought it said, "max.5 words per line,.6 to 18 lines max." Oops! It was 5 word minimum... so I struggled to say precisely what was needed lol. Oh well, Since I worked so hard to shave it down, I'm going to go with it! Tysm! Xo
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