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Autumn Leaves

In the dusty shack of my childhood, I sat between them, my old self and his brothers the fright in the place was knee-deep nightmares go towards wind of sleep long before I close my eyelids autumn leaves cry for me If only our touch is allowed
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Fowler Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Why is it Autumn seems to tug memories from us? Cozy thoughts? Cold thoughts? Nicely written Lasaad. :)
Sands Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 2:01 PM
I like that line...autumn leaves cry for me. Well written. :)
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 5:15 AM
From the yore dwelling in memories--in step with autumn.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 1:20 AM
Great imagery, Sotto. Reminds me of the song.
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