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In the dusty shack of my childhood, I sat between them, my old self and his brothers the fright in the place was knee-deep nightmares go towards wind of sleep long before I close my eyelids autumn leaves cry for me If only our touch is allowed

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Date: 10/27/2022 8:24:00 AM
Why is it Autumn seems to tug memories from us? Cozy thoughts? Cold thoughts? Nicely written Lasaad. :)
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Date: 10/26/2022 2:01:00 PM
I like that line...autumn leaves cry for me. Well written. :)
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Date: 10/26/2022 5:15:00 AM
From the yore dwelling in memories--in step with autumn.
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Date: 10/26/2022 1:20:00 AM
Great imagery, Sotto. Reminds me of the song.
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