Written 8 August for Seasons Now And After Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
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Autumn is near When nights on hours of the day do impinge Softer are the rays of mid-day sunshine Greenish leaves do start to pick orange tinge Tall lupines linger low, curl down and pine Roses slowly start to shed their petals Lovely lavenders languish with crisp fear Cooler air from grey clouds starts to settle Purple pansies begin to drip sad tears When birds flutter with less strength with reason It`s time to hail the fall`s train which is near Time to greet the coming Autumn season With its splash of red saffron hues so dear.
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