Get Your Premium Membership

Autumn In Waiting

Autumn in Waiting I love when vineyards turn to yellow, orange, and red. I will get up an hour later, and may earlier go to bed. The valley floor strewn wide, with Chardonnay leaves. Growing tall on their stalks, are the corn in their sheaves. Clouds shaping skyward, sculpting Michelangelo’s art. Grapes gone to seedlings, waiting cold winter’s heart. Whips of wind curl and lick, at sleeping summer gardens. Burgundy mums fall and nod, in clay that freezes or hardens. Blonde grasses turn white, waiting for tinges of green. While other trees go to sleep, with leaves no longer seen. Things seem to linger, or stop nature’s clocks. Birds preen their feather’s, to fly south from our docks. Time, stopped for the mellow, with unknowing hesitation. We wait for the deep sleep, of wet winter’s presentation. -Edlynn Nau © November 10, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/10/2020 9:02:00 PM
You have celebrated the autumn season with great beauty and imagery Edlynn. It is my favorite time of year that always passes by too quickly. This beauty is going into my Faves! Sorry I didn't read or comment on this sooner. xxoo
Login to Reply
Nau Avatar
Edlynn Nau
Date: 1/10/2020 9:40:00 PM
Ha ha! You’re so kind hearted! I will take people reading ANYTIME! I’m with you. I love that Autumn is like spring only softer. I think I did a much better job on the season with “Fall into Winter” but, we can’t rest on our laurels so I tried again! Thanks so much for your attention!
Date: 11/21/2019 4:32:00 PM
Hi Edlynn. Stopped by to see your latest. So happy that you're still producing prime poetry. I love rhyme and I love fall and you've delivered the best of both. I enjoy your poetry. Please keep writing dear poet and friend. Hugs. Jan
Login to Reply
Nau Avatar
Edlynn Nau
Date: 11/21/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thank-you Jan! Like Roseanne Roseannadanna once said, it’s always something. If it’s not evacuating from fires, prepping for them, PSPS outages, then it’s taking care of your 90 year old dad! Therefore, I know I’m a hit or miss poet and I long for the days I can return to write again and be with all of you.
Date: 11/20/2019 8:16:00 PM
My friend, I am truly delighted to see your return to gift us your wondrous and gifted poetry! This is a great and finely crafted beauty- one that so inspires this old poet! A fav and a very much appreciated new gifted piece, to have found and read.
Login to Reply
Nau Avatar
Edlynn Nau
Date: 11/20/2019 9:25:00 PM
Awwww! I think you’ve made my day during what has been a tough six weeks! Thanks for your encouragement. You’ve always been that!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things