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Autumn In the Air

September creeps close
as August hangs on dearly
subtle hints of Fall...
an odd tingling in the air
a slight shudder in the trees

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Elaine George

November 3, 2016 at 4:44 AM

What a sensational Tanka, Tim!! Many congrats on your first place win. Lainey.

Janis Medders Tobechi

November 2, 2016 at 8:05 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win. Sweet tanka.

Paul Callus

August 6, 2016 at 8:10 AM

Yes...I can feel through your words, especially the slight shudder in the trees, that autumn is in the air, Tim! Lovely and worthy of its high placing...congratulations! // paul

Charlie Smith

August 5, 2016 at 7:15 AM

Well done Tim, congratulations...

Sandra Haight

August 4, 2016 at 10:33 PM

Tim, congratulations on your podium win. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Sandra

Alexis Y.

August 4, 2016 at 9:30 PM

Hi Tim, Congratulations on your 3rd place win: -) Alexis

Jan Allison

August 4, 2016 at 6:52 PM

dropping back again with my congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

August 4, 2016 at 5:56 PM

Love the turn Tim..congrats on the big win

Laura Leiser

August 4, 2016 at 5:39 PM

I liked the unique perspective in your excellent tanka, Tim! Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2016 at 5:24 PM

I love this imagery. I always feel melancholy as my birth month approaches. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.

Jan Allison

September 17, 2014 at 5:25 PM

wonderfully expressive write Tim :-) many congrats. Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

September 17, 2014 at 2:33 PM

how expressive, tim... you always keep me on a delight- mode... congrats and huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 17, 2014 at 7:31 AM

Congratulations on your lovely winning poem Tim.

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 17, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Perfectly done write on autumn, short and sweet, Tim. congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 17, 2014 at 4:28 AM

- Yes, the autumn is here - Lovely poem, Tim - Congrats on your 4th place - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

September 16, 2014 at 8:49 PM

The trees, the animals, the people, everything seems to feel a slight shudder as the autumn season approaches. You've captured that feeling perfectly!.... Nicely done, Tim! Congrats on your win!

Vesna Kovrlija

October 29, 2012 at 3:10 AM

lovely autumn poem

Sandra Adams

October 24, 2012 at 6:39 PM

i can hear that tingling and see the shutter through the trees...good haiku!

Lucilla Carrillo

October 23, 2012 at 9:18 PM

This is a good Tanka for this time of the year. Thank you for your nice comment on my poem ( Sister ). Many blessings Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2012 at 7:00 AM

an awesome autumn tanka, probably my favorite of all these ones posted in a row. Love visiting lots of tankas!!

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2012 at 12:00 PM

good thing it was only a small vibrate... love the upcoming air approaching... always~PD

Kathryn Collins

October 21, 2012 at 9:09 AM

love it Tim. Now it's October and November is pushing in. love, Kathy

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

October 15, 2012 at 7:08 PM

Definitely! Well done Tim! Good luck in the contest! :)

David Williams

October 14, 2012 at 12:05 PM

Tim, I am enjoying reading all of the Autumn poems and this one is no exception, well done....David

Omneya Kamal

October 14, 2012 at 9:57 AM

I love it!!! That's what I felt when I witnessed autumn for the first time in my life when I went abroad. I don't have Autumn in my country it is not very noticed.

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