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Autumn In Nature

wind touches each twig confetti leaves fall from trees… fox swims underneath Sept 10, 2022 1.20pm https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/ 5/7/5 12 words 17 syllables 78 characters Autumn in Nature - Haiku Contest Judged: 9/17/2022 1:19:00 PM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 3 (out of 5 multi-w)

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/1/2022 7:44:00 AM

Lovely image, Len ~

Len Gasun
Date: 11/2/2022 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Line. God bless you always. Hugs

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/11/2022 11:31:00 AM

I love "confetti leaves"! Congrats on your placement in the contest, Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/26/2022 12:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Jim. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/25/2022 10:58:00 AM

What a great poem for the autumn season! I love the way you captured the innocent fun of fall! This is a fave for me!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 5:40:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comment especially for faving it my dear friend Kelly. God bless. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2022 4:37:00 PM

oh I love the imagery of fox swimming. Very creative one here. Congrats

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 5:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your inspiring comment and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Andrea. God bless. Hugs

Md Johnson

Date: 9/18/2022 8:22:00 AM

I love the aerobics of Autumn. Congratulations on your win. —MDJ

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and your congratulatory comments my dear friend MD. God bless. Hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/18/2022 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations for this nice win :)

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 5:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Heidi. God bless. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/18/2022 7:03:00 AM

Love this Len. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 4:58:00 PM

I'm glad you love this poem of mine my dear friend Linda. Thank you so much for reading and your congratulatory greetings. God bless. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/18/2022 3:59:00 AM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku, wonderful imagery!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear friend, Tania. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you. Hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/17/2022 7:55:00 PM

"fox swims" Great image. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2022 4:45:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your thoughtful congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. God bless you always. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 9/10/2022 4:08:00 PM

Nice Haiku, Len, especially that last line. I really like the "fox swims underneath". Hugs, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 9/16/2022 9:01:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend Bill for your encouraging words. God bless you always. Hugs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/10/2022 2:03:00 AM

I have an autumn poem that mentions confetti too so i liked how u used it in haiku. Kudos for the fine poem. Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/16/2022 9:02:00 PM

OK, I'll be there soon my dear friend. Sorry for coming late. Thanks for your encouraging words on my poem. God bless you always. Hugs

Deb M

Date: 9/9/2022 11:41:00 PM

Hey Len….short, sweet and lovely…..Enjoyed! Debx

Len Gasun
Date: 9/9/2022 11:57:00 PM

Hello! Thanks for dropping by my dear friend Deb, reading my poem and your wonderful comment. God bless. Hugs