Len Gasun Poet Haiku

Autumn In Nature

wind touches each twig
confetti leaves fall from trees…
fox swims underneath





Sept 10, 2022     1.20pm






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12 words
17 syllables
78 characters

Autumn in Nature - Haiku
Contest Judged:  9/17/2022 1:19:00 PM
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Place 3 (out of 5 multi-w)

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Line Gauthier November 1, 2022 at 7:44 AM Lovely image, Len ~ Len Gasun November 2, 2022 at 10:13 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Line. God bless you always. Hugs

Jim Slaughter October 11, 2022 at 11:31 AM I love "confetti leaves"! Congrats on your placement in the contest, Len. Len Gasun October 26, 2022 at 12:22 AM Thank you so much for your kind comments and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Jim. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler September 25, 2022 at 10:58 AM What a great poem for the autumn season! I love the way you captured the innocent fun of fall! This is a fave for me! Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 5:40 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comment especially for faving it my dear friend Kelly. God bless. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2022 at 4:37 PM oh I love the imagery of fox swimming. Very creative one here. Congrats Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 5:36 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your inspiring comment and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Andrea. God bless. Hugs

MD Johnson September 18, 2022 at 8:22 AM I love the aerobics of Autumn. Congratulations on your win. —MDJ Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 5:29 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and your congratulatory comments my dear friend MD. God bless. Hugs

Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 8:02 AM Congratulations for this nice win :) Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 5:23 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Heidi. God bless. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler September 18, 2022 at 7:03 AM Love this Len. Congratulations on your win! Linda Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 4:58 PM I'm glad you love this poem of mine my dear friend Linda. Thank you so much for reading and your congratulatory greetings. God bless. Hugs

Tania Kitchin September 18, 2022 at 3:59 AM Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku, wonderful imagery! Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 4:52 PM Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear friend, Tania. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you. Hugs

Christuraj Alex September 17, 2022 at 7:55 PM "fox swims" Great image. Congratulations! Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 4:45 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your thoughtful congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. God bless you always. Hugs

Bill Baker September 10, 2022 at 4:08 PM Nice Haiku, Len, especially that last line. I really like the "fox swims underneath". Hugs, Bill Len Gasun September 16, 2022 at 9:01 PM Thank you my dear friend Bill for your encouraging words. God bless you always. Hugs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri September 10, 2022 at 2:03 AM I have an autumn poem that mentions confetti too so i liked how u used it in haiku. Kudos for the fine poem. Plz also read and comment my newest poem too. Len Gasun September 16, 2022 at 9:02 PM OK, I'll be there soon my dear friend. Sorry for coming late. Thanks for your encouraging words on my poem. God bless you always. Hugs

Deb M September 9, 2022 at 11:41 PM Hey Len….short, sweet and lovely…..Enjoyed! Debx Len Gasun September 9, 2022 at 11:57 PM Hello! Thanks for dropping by my dear friend Deb, reading my poem and your wonderful comment. God bless. Hugs