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Autumn I Sigh

The magic of Autumn wraps my heart in a bow A miracle of nature to reap where it go On wing swept currents I want to fly in the sky Or dance to melodies of falls glorious surround With uplifted spirits I feel deeply earth's sigh And fling myself down to play with leaves on the ground Along the shore of a rivers’ mighty deep edge Colors swirl alive in orange, yellow and red I gaze transfixed as I tiptoe its’ grassy ledge Where the trout and the salmon have made their last bed In the fall I hear whispers of my mortal end As leaves descend softly in their last sighing breath I skip among colors my soul will soon transcend Into a web of decay that ends with our death written: 10-2-2019 Autumn Sonnet Poetry Contest 2nd place Thank You!

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Date: 10/23/2019 3:58:00 PM
Very beautifully penned Jeanne! That Autumn sure is a magician! Congrats!
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Date: 10/13/2019 12:14:00 PM
Beautiful write Jeanne, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/6/2019 4:24:00 PM
brilliant write... congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 10/6/2019 1:41:00 PM
Loved this Jeanne just what I was hoping for so congrats on a great write and win!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/6/2019 6:19:00 PM
John, what an honor to get a high placement in your contest...thanks for asking us to stretch into feelings.
Date: 10/4/2019 5:39:00 AM
Best wishes in this contest. Artfully penned.... Panagiota oxox
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/4/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Panagiota.
Date: 10/4/2019 2:27:00 AM
"On wing swept currents I want to fly in the sky Or dance to melodies of falls glorious surround' - who would not want that? I want it now.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/4/2019 8:33:00 AM
Don't you just love fall's colors! And I see the correlation of fall being the autumn of my age...a lovely time to be alive!
Date: 10/2/2019 10:23:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem and should do well in the contest. I enjoyed every word and hope you know you're very talented, my friend. Bless you
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/3/2019 7:35:00 AM
You are very kind dear Regina...thank you for your visit today.
Date: 10/2/2019 6:23:00 PM
I was mesmerized by the last stanza that so beautifully and hauntingly captured my own feelings for autumn as this point in my life. I love how you delivered each line with a poignancy that grew its touch. A wonderful write, a real imagery gripping poem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/2/2019 6:28:00 PM
Yes, so easy to feel the pull of decay as we age. You have lifted my spirits with your words.
Date: 10/2/2019 5:10:00 PM
This was sadly beautiful Jeanne. It left me with a somber feeling. The contest did require emotions for this one, so your poem should really do well. Best wishes.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/2/2019 5:18:00 PM
I had originally written it about walking through falls bounty but rewrote it for the contest to reflect how I see the correlation of falls death to our own. And at my age after cancer I have felt the breath of ending close by.

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