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Autumn Has Found a Home In Me

Memories of swaying palms held dear
Nothing compares to these Fall trees
We wait with joy for colors to appear 
Autumn has found a home in me. 

Nothing compares to these Fall trees
Summer’s gone - now we’ve circled round
Autumn has found a home in me
Her golden beauty holds me spellbound

Summer’s gone - now we’ve circled round
From tropical delight to temperate skyline
Her golden beauty holds me spellbound
Floating in midair like liquid sunshine

From tropical delight to temperate skyline
We wait with joy for colors to appear  
Floating in midair like liquid sunshine
Memories of swaying palms held dear


Autumn Pantoum Poetry Contest
Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Skillfully executed in colorful images, SuZ. A delightful read--apt for autumn's revelry. Best to you.
Delaney Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 8:11 AM
I really appreciate your visit today, Vijay:so happy you enjoyed reading my musings on Autumn Take care. SuZ
Mccann Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 7:20 PM
I'm on board with Sara: that "Autumn has found a home in me" is a precious line. I envy your being able to write this form so perfectly! Elizabeth
Delaney Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 3:07 AM
Thanks so much Elizabeth: It is an interesting form. Like putting a jigsaw of words together. SuZ
Horsman Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Lovely visual poetry, Suzanne Good luck in contest. Harry
Delaney Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Harry: I was so shocked to hear of Connie’s passing……she loved and missed Autumn. Thanks for the good wishes for the contest.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 8:05 AM
A phantasmagoric portrait of Autumn painted by your wondrous pen, dearest Suzanne. Blessings!
Delaney Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 12:05 PM
Glad it transported you, Demetrios: Lots of leafy blessings to you as well, SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 4:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your Pantoum. I really like the line, "Autumn has found a home in me". Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I like the choice of photo. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
Delaney Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Sara: I was trying to think of a good line to trigger an Autumn poem and it came to me. Still thinking of your Warm Caramel and apples. SuZ
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