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Autumn Flurry of Windswept Sooth

Those pesky leaves adored by youth. Hued leaves and wind, a conjoined twin. Autumn flurry of windswept sooth.* Kids harvest fell-wings, to jump in. Hued leaves and wind, a conjoined twin. The twirl, the whirl of crimson red. Kids harvest fell-wings, to jump in. Crisp yellow, brown and purple fed. The twirl, the whirl of crimson red. Six feet deep, each yard grows fatter. Crisp yellow, brown and purple fed. When swept in piles, they oft’ scatter. Six feet deep, each yard grows fatter. Autumn flurry of windswept sooth. When swept in piles, they oft’ scatter - Those pesky leaves adored by youth. 9/8/2022 Contest: AUTUMN PANTOUM Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger Rhymezone used to verify rhymes *sooth - reality
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Hind Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:01 PM
Such a nostalgic piece of poetry, dear poetess. Your memories through this become your treasure, though- don't forget. They shaped your beautiful gift. <3
Kauffman Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Sheer delight expressed as kids are pictured jumping in piles of the fallen treasures of autumn! High fives and congrats on your win Kim. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Thank you…so sweetly said, Sam!
Fowler Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Back with congratulations your win Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, Linda! God bless you, sweet owl ;)
Poet Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations, on your contest win, Kim. You crafted a so beautiful pantoum
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! I appreciate your comments, my friend!
Alex Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 5:14 AM
You have been a winner always. This is a marvelous work on autumn in pantoum form. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:19 AM
You are always so encouraging, my friend! Thank you!
Miller Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 3:06 AM
congratulations, a fine and beautiful pantoum
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Deschler Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 10:05 AM
I loved to jump into a big pile of leaves when I was a kid. And, that memory always comes back to me when the leaves begin to drop... Your wonderful poem also evokes those same childhood memories. Great work, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:19 AM
So glad you enjoyed and it brought back great childhood memories! Thank you, Kelly!
Kyser Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 12:53 PM
This is very nice, Kim. I'm unfamiliar with fell-wings?
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Made up word with fell and wings, the leaves as if when falling have wings ;) Thank you, Jeff!
Fowler Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Perfect Kim - wonderland of conjoined twins and piles of fun! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thanks so much, Linda! :)
Rose  Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 6:28 PM
What a lovely Autumn flurry Kim, I enjoyed your entry very much, hope it wins a high placement :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Rose!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 7:46 AM
A lovely pantoum. Somone said it not need to rhyme, but I would prefer it that way.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Thank you, Victor! Took me three times to come up with one that worked for me. :)
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