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Those pesky leaves adored by youth. Hued leaves and wind, a conjoined twin. Autumn flurry of windswept sooth.* Kids harvest fell-wings, to jump in. Hued leaves and wind, a conjoined twin. The twirl, the whirl of crimson red. Kids harvest fell-wings, to jump in. Crisp yellow, brown and purple fed. The twirl, the whirl of crimson red. Six feet deep, each yard grows fatter. Crisp yellow, brown and purple fed. When swept in piles, they oft’ scatter. Six feet deep, each yard grows fatter. Autumn flurry of windswept sooth. When swept in piles, they oft’ scatter - Those pesky leaves adored by youth. 9/8/2022 Contest: AUTUMN PANTOUM Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger Rhymezone used to verify rhymes *sooth - reality

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Date: 10/11/2024 6:01:00 PM
Such a nostalgic piece of poetry, dear poetess. Your memories through this become your treasure, though- don't forget. They shaped your beautiful gift. <3
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Date: 11/8/2022 10:56:00 AM
Sheer delight expressed as kids are pictured jumping in piles of the fallen treasures of autumn! High fives and congrats on your win Kim. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 1:42:00 PM
Thank you…so sweetly said, Sam!
Date: 11/8/2022 6:56:00 AM
Back with congratulations your win Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! God bless you, sweet owl ;)
Date: 11/8/2022 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations, on your contest win, Kim. You crafted a so beautiful pantoum
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! I appreciate your comments, my friend!
Date: 11/8/2022 5:14:00 AM
You have been a winner always. This is a marvelous work on autumn in pantoum form. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:19:00 AM
You are always so encouraging, my friend! Thank you!
Date: 11/8/2022 3:06:00 AM
congratulations, a fine and beautiful pantoum
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 9/20/2022 10:05:00 AM
I loved to jump into a big pile of leaves when I was a kid. And, that memory always comes back to me when the leaves begin to drop... Your wonderful poem also evokes those same childhood memories. Great work, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:19:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed and it brought back great childhood memories! Thank you, Kelly!
Date: 9/14/2022 12:53:00 PM
This is very nice, Kim. I'm unfamiliar with fell-wings?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:18:00 AM
Made up word with fell and wings, the leaves as if when falling have wings ;) Thank you, Jeff!
Date: 9/9/2022 10:20:00 AM
Perfect Kim - wonderland of conjoined twins and piles of fun! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2022 7:19:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda! :)
Date: 9/8/2022 6:28:00 PM
What a lovely Autumn flurry Kim, I enjoyed your entry very much, hope it wins a high placement :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Rose!
Date: 9/8/2022 7:46:00 AM
A lovely pantoum. Somone said it not need to rhyme, but I would prefer it that way.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2022 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Took me three times to come up with one that worked for me. :)

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