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Autumn Fire

Autumn fire rich glimmer hues of amber  

Unbidden, but welcomed what it covers  
         
Tinder ablaze of golden hue colours      

Unhurried, yet empowering wonders     
           
Mien aura different from all others

Nude, descending foliage creak and shudder


Flaunting leurs pure florid  madness    
             
Inspiring emblazon pigments on canvas    

Rustling leaves, chilly morn grace   

Ever so sweet rest and waits for your embrace      

            
10/24/2016     

Leurs French word for their

11/9/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Eve CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and what a lovely image ~
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations :)
Breidenthal Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Fantastic poem! :) Had a good time, reading! A 7 for excellence. -JWE
White Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 1:43 AM
I am awed, it's a wonderful acrostic, and that picture to go with it!!!
Sathasivam Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Excellent Acrostic eve. Well penned. Lovely picture you have posted. Thanks for sharing it.
Wigley Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:36 PM
Terrific, Eve, rich and vivid. Will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
Ball Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Beautiful Acrostic Eve. Wonderful description and love the pic. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 8:31 PM
thank you , Judy, sure hope so....Hugs
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 4:13 PM
I love the acrostic Eve such vivid description of my favourite season:-) you should chalk up a win this time!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 3:36 PM
You should get a win THIS time round, dear. By the way, didn't BW ask us for five lines of poetry? Double check it!!!
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Yes she did :) thank you, Andrea. Hugs Eve
Boardman Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Hi I liked this as your words have a slightly disjointed, lilting feel. Good luck
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