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Autumn Fire

One can hardly take a breath at all
For brilliance splashed against the wall
has reasoned with a summer's soul
and paints the season with vibrant gold

The brittle breeze as evening falls 
is mixed with smoke from burning piles
of leaves we raked one afternoon
stacked high with colors bold and wild

Smoke whirls up high above the house
Each silent garden laid to rest,
As the close of day leaves nothing left
but crimson skies, and colors red

We can hear the music of the trees,
with rustling sounds, stained red and tan
While wind seeks out the apple tree,
And scents the air with celestial zest

The mighty oak drops acorns, freed,
Brown squirrels have scurried to their nest
They've stored a harvest from the earth,
We'll watch as geese form silhouettes

And when the trees are barren branched,
A world takes rest, to start anew
While autumn prances through the hills,
With stain ablaze in amber hues

The heart is filled with peace of mind, 
As embers warm our home tonight
While weary gather near the flame,
This year at end, we bid adieu

One can hardly take a breath at all
For brilliance splashed against the wall
Has reasoned with a summer's soul
To paint the season edged in gold ......

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10/27/16
Contest: Autumn Fire
Sponsor: Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Yvonne Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:45 AM
You are and have always been one of my favourite poets. I can't tell you how often I've read "Where The Sycamore Grew". Love this gorgeous poem. A Fav.
Wigley Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 1:46 AM
Beautifully descriptive piece, tinged with loss and longing. Love it, Carrie. Viv x
Teagan Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Wow, this is so beautiful, I can picture the scenes clearly... very nice.
Mark Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Stunning visuals Carrie and a rhyme scheme to be envied, ...love it ..Ian
Johnson Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Well done. Congratulations!
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Very beautiful.! Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 3:09 AM
Wow Carrie, I see why this poem got such a high placement. It is stunning! I adore autumn and you have painted her gloriously! Congratulations! 7 : )
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Beautifully crafted, Carrie. Congratulations...
Haight Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 7:02 PM
So lovely, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Well done. Congratulations on your placement.
P  Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Warm sentiments and impressive imagery really stand out in this poem. Splash of an ending Carrie. Now that's Autumn! 7+
Daniel Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Awesome picture you have painted with your words, Carrie:) congratulations on your win:)
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Carrie autumn is my favourite season and you have painted a perfect picture. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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