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Poetry/Haiku/autumn falling
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Written, September 22, 2024
For the International Contest, Autumn Haiku - Set of Three
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 10/08/2024

Second Place

Girl reading under the canopy of an ancient tree bookworm fantasy autumn book day | Premium AI-generated image

 

autumn is falling
with weeping melancholy ~
        birds twitter chirp peep

orange leaves scatter
red twirl in a timeless dance ~
        to lay in decay

the trees are tranquil
their autumn cloak in tatters ~
       twisted branches seek

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:39:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. I really like the accompanying picture. Sara K

Constance La France
Date: 10/22/2024 4:05:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the nice comment, compliment and congratulations, I love that pic too, love Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 10:59:00 PM

Congrats, Constance. Some clever lines in your set!

Constance La France
Date: 10/22/2024 4:06:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, love Constance

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:12:00 PM

Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.

Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2024 6:38:00 PM

Tania, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, Constance

John Read

Date: 9/23/2024 10:07:00 AM

Autumn and spring my favourite seasons enjoyed your 3 Haikus Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:03:00 PM

John, thank you for the comment and compliment, Constance

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/23/2024 6:13:00 AM

Dear Constance, when I can fully participate in a poem and imagine all the aspects of Autumn because the words are full of poetic wonders, then I know it is a work of an artist. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:06:00 PM

My Dear friend, Daniel, thank you so much for the lovely comment, and compliment on my poem, appreciate, Constance

Ink Empress

Date: 9/22/2024 9:34:00 AM

Your string of haiku truly stood out for me dear warrior poetess constance! Absolutely gorgeous! So well woven and delivered with such picturesque and autumnal imagery! I especially loved “weeping melancholy “ “autumn cloak in tatters ~ twisted branches seek ” stunning! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always! Best wishes

Constance La France
Date: 9/24/2024 12:07:00 PM

Ink, thank you so much for wonderful sweet comment and compliment, your warrior poetess, Constance