Autumn Enchantment

What autumn has bedecked
with plants, founts and flowers,
in colors of divine radiance
the sun hangs in the fourth sphere,
then comes purple daybreak
beautiful sky brimful with stars,
none can match mi cielo,
the lovely parts of your face!

Your black hair lost in the forest
hands soft and delicate as lilies,
hidden partially beneath your coat
breasts and arms, engirdling your fantasy frame,
stay, elusive shadow of my beloved,
lovely illusion on this soft autumn day
sweet woman for whom I love so sadly,
image of enchantment I love the best...

Today autumn washes gently along the Gulf of Mexico,
I gather cones of pines in yellow baskets,
opening a liter of sparkling red wine,
come mi corazon, in the energy of the Harvest moon glow,
for inside your simple and tender heart
my numb dreams yearn to snuggle up,
just as when the night of autumn starts,
we cuddle like two birds in cozy nests!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/5/2013 12:57:00 AM
How did I miss this wonderous piece??? Absolutely enthralling, Ken....
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Date: 11/5/2013 5:39:00 AM
Hi Eileen Thank you for reading this one. Ken
Date: 10/30/2013 10:15:00 AM
Exquisite and breathtaking. You really stir the heart with love and nature. Amazing :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 11:21:00 AM
Hi Karen Thank you for the lovely comment! Ken
Date: 10/29/2013 4:34:00 PM
penned beautiful dear friend
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:38:00 PM
Hi Liam, Thanks and good to read from you old friend.. Ken
Date: 10/29/2013 12:38:00 PM
- Ken .... romantic man .... this is so beautiful ...... more ... more ... :)))) - Always a pleasure to read your work. - Have a very nice autumn day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:41:00 PM
HI Anne, Thank you for the lovely visit today! Ken
Date: 10/28/2013 10:58:00 PM
A very romantic piece of poetry, that was uniquely set in autumn. I enjoyed reading this poem, with all it's richly detailed scenery. Excellent writing, Ken!
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:07:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Thank you for the wonderful comment and visit.. Ken
Date: 10/28/2013 4:05:00 PM
Ken, this truly is enchanting. I really love this. so magical. a FAVE
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:52:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you for reviewing this one.. Ken
Date: 10/27/2013 5:51:00 PM
romance flows from your pen so easily, this is a gorgeous poem Ken :)
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Date: 10/27/2013 5:55:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you and good to read from you today.. Ken
Date: 10/27/2013 3:37:00 PM
Beautiful throughout. I was enchanted by the piece. Well done! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/27/2013 5:10:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you for visiting.. Ken
Date: 10/27/2013 2:49:00 PM
Love so sadly...oh...what a beautiful lovely longing love poem Ken...
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Date: 10/27/2013 2:53:00 PM
Hi Donna, thank you kindly for your wonderful comment.. Ken
Date: 10/27/2013 2:44:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2013 2:46:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you for a lovely visit as well! Ken
Date: 10/27/2013 2:07:00 PM
Hi ken; a beautiful poem with beautiful thoughts of Autumn and also very romantic. It reminds me of a song - Abre el corazon y dejame entrar. You are a romantic by heart. Thanks for reading - A Vida Loca.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/27/2013 2:12:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, Thank you for stopping by and the wonderful visit.. Ken
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