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Autumn dust

riot of colour autumn leaves adorn the ground ~ there’s beauty in death life within trees hibernates resurrection is promised

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 5:39:00 PM

Meaningful poetry, through the Tanka form. I like it, Unseeking Seeker. Have a blissful week, my friend. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/13/2023 6:23:00 PM

Thank you, Bill

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/13/2023 7:40:00 AM

Amen. Love it. God bless you, love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/13/2023 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Gina :)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/13/2023 3:27:00 AM

“Riot of color” thats a brilliant line. Love this tanka and how you’ve also said “ theres beauty in death” ah. A very uplifting ending too, powerful.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/13/2023 3:54:00 AM

Thank you, IE. I last used this form in 2021, as per my records