Autumn dust

riot of colour
autumn leaves adorn the ground ~
there’s beauty in death
life within trees hibernates
resurrection is promised
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Baker Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 5:39 PM
Meaningful poetry, through the Tanka form. I like it, Unseeking Seeker. Have a blissful week, my friend. Bill
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November 13, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Thank you, Bill
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November 13, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Amen. Love it. God bless you, love, Gina
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November 13, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Gina :)
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:27 AM
“Riot of color” thats a brilliant line. Love this tanka and how you’ve also said “ theres beauty in death” ah. A very uplifting ending too, powerful.
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November 13, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Thank you, IE. I last used this form in 2021, as per my records
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