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Autumn Constanza

Death took you like a sneak thief
Just before Autumn gold appeared
The time of year your soul revered

Proving that life is all too brief
The loss too vivid to comprehend
My beautiful gracious lady friend

 O magic of a single Autumn leaf
 The beauty of your soul in heaven rests
Away from strife and life’s tempests

It isn’t  enough to quell my grief
But your memory lives in my heart
Especially in Autumn’s works of art

Death took you like a sneak thief
Proving that life is all too brief
O magic of a single Autumn leaf
It isn’t enough to quell my grief

Dedicated to Connie Marcum Wong
A beautiful friend and Mentor who I will always miss. 
Written in the Constanza poetry form. 

Constanza, a poetry Form created by our very own Connie Marcum Wong, consists of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line has a set meter of eight syllables. The first lines of all the stanzas can be read successively as an independent poem, with the rest of the poem weaved in to express a deeper meaning. The first lines convey a theme written in monorhyme, while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together. All the first lines are added as a monorhyme at the end.
Rhyme scheme: a/b/b, a/c/c, a/d/d, a/e/e, a/f/f, aaaaa. 5 TRIPLETS, (15 LINES), FOLOWED BY A 5 LINE MONORHYME. SEE EXAMPLE BELOW.
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Mcconnell Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Such a lovely beautiful piece Suzanne, really well penned indeed. Blessings,Gordon
Baker Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 8:07 AM
What a beautifully written poem in Connie's form, Suz. You've honored her by sharing your thoughts through your poetry in her Constanza form. The picture was a great match to the poem. Thanks for sharing your gift og poetry with us, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Villarosa Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Wow, this is a nicely written poem and a kind tribute to a dear friend. Expressing our deepest thoughts through poems is a great way to start the healing process. Connie will forever be remembered.
Delaney Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:10 PM
I agree, Noel: Writing is always a good way of making sense of the world. Blessings, SuZ
Coy Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 11:39 AM
The importance of Connie to you, and the sincerity of the sadness you feel at her loss, come through very strongly in this finely-penned tribute.
Delaney Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:08 PM
Thanks so much, Michael: I appreciate your thoughtful comment. SuZ
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:42 AM
you did an outstanding job Suzanne with this difficult form. I believe with your heart open with grief, the beauty of it all spilled out. Connie would be proud, a fav for me, gl but I don't think you need it, this is high caliber xo
Delaney Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:51 AM
Grateful Thanks, Vie, for such a warm and comforting comment. Hugs, SuZ
George Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 9:40 PM
A wonderfully befitting tribute to our dear Connie !"O magic of a single Autumn leaf/ The beauty of your soul in heaven rests/ Away from strife and life’s tempests" love this stanza, dear Suzanne!
Delaney Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Thanks Valsa, for sharing your thoughts. Always appreciated. SuZ
Tor Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:11 PM
Lovely Poetry Suzanne. Connie would have loved this effort of yours. Wonderful to read...
Delaney Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Thanks Michael: for the kind comment and your friendship. SuZ
Watt Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 3:11 PM
Indeed, Connie's memory lives in our hearts. Her poetry moved us and her big heart made life sweeter for so many. Thank you for these lovely and beautiful thoughts in her honor ~ John
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Thanks John for your lovely comment. It was a great pleasure to host this contest in honor of Connie. Blessings, SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 3:01 PM
Precious tribute, Suz, and thanks so much for your contest collection of all the other lovely Constanza poems I am seeing around here. I did a really stupid thing yesterday. I completely forgot to take part in the Zoom ceremony for Connie. If you went , I am sorry to have missed your or anyone else from Soup that may have showed up. Hope you get over that horrible flu soon.
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 6:11 PM
Hi Andrea: I didn’t know there was a Zoom Ceremony for Connie. I must have missed the invitation. Hopefully someone made a video to share. Yes feeling a little better now. Time heals. Luv, SuZ
Logan Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Your thoughts are lovely, Suz. Connie is sorely missed.
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Jenna: A true friend to ALL. SuZ
Poet Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 1:41 PM
This is such a wonderful homage, Suzanne. Dedicated to Connie, may she rest in peace. A single leaf falling in autumn serves as a metaphor for the process of aging; this is a wonderful piece of writing by truly, life is far too brief.
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much Lassad: We are all better for knowing her. SuZ
Pandit Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Single autumn leaf --a metaphor for aging--lovely write SuZ--indeed life is too brief!
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Thanks dear Vijay: The cycles of the seasons ensure life carries on even if just in hearts and memories SuZ
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