Autumn Colors

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Autumn has tinged gold the sycamore leaves And turned crimson the sumac's soul Sweet gum's burgundy five-pointed star pleases Red the shade of maple's tri-fold Fall decorates the hardwood forest A reprieve before stripped bare in the cold When no longer songs from spring's chorist And crickets' love a thing now untold

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/20/2016 6:17:00 PM

This poem depicts great imagery. I love the last line. Beautiful poem...............A.M

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/20/2016 9:58:00 AM

Wonderful imagery Mrs Sara. I just love trees! The sycamore is a favorite of mine. I was raised listening to crickets, what a beautiful song they sing, but only if they are outside. I don't allow any cricket singing in the house:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2016 2:23:00 PM

Daniel, Crickets in the house are definitely a no-no..LOL..They will keep one up all night with their serranading their love..Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to read and comment..Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/19/2016 10:01:00 PM

Enjoyed read. "Fall decorates the hardwood forest When no longer songs from spring's chorist" very enjoyed read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2016 2:19:00 PM

Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you liked my work..Your comments are treasured..Sara