Autumn Chill
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How I remember walking hand in hand
The morning chill in autumn air astound
When October golden days rolled around~
Slowly through the forest across his land
Reached dad's cabin ~ giving the door a push
He'd roar up the wood stove perk some coffee
Soon the cabin would be warm as toffee~
His mancave retreat hid deep in the bush
To be invited I glowed with honor
Sharing the pride he felt down to the core
Yet never dreaming time would not stand still~
Each October fondly I remember
Never would I~ could I have asked for more
Fall memories outside my window sill~
AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020
Submitted on March 20, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1093 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST
on September 28, 2019 for contest AUTUMN SONNET sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019
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