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How I remember walking hand in hand The morning chill in autumn air astound When October golden days rolled around~ Slowly through the forest across his land Reached dad's cabin ~ giving the door a push He'd roar up the wood stove perk some coffee Soon the cabin would be warm as toffee~ His mancave retreat hid deep in the bush To be invited I glowed with honor Sharing the pride he felt down to the core Yet never dreaming time would not stand still~ Each October fondly I remember Never would I~ could I have asked for more Fall memories outside my window sill~ AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 20, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1093 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST on September 28, 2019 for contest AUTUMN SONNET sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON

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Date: 3/21/2022 10:25:00 AM
Nice Line, such a warm and loving poem can't help but bring back similar feelings to all who read this soft, sweet poem, congrats!
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Date: 3/22/2022 2:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, James. Most appreciated ~
Date: 10/2/2019 12:50:00 AM
Vivid childhood experience pictured well. Thanks for this and for sharing the "Italian Sonnet" form. God bless you.
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Date: 10/2/2019 6:55:00 AM
Thank you, Beata. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/29/2019 3:52:00 PM
Makes me want to be in that cabin
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Date: 9/29/2019 8:15:00 PM
What a lovely image to see you and my dad hang out in his cabin. Two peas in a pod.
Date: 9/28/2019 3:04:00 PM
I love this one Line. It reminds me of my cabin house in the mountains with the woodstove, etc. Well done! :)
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Date: 9/28/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.

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