Autumn Begins

Autumn Begins

I stand on my porch 
eyes raised into a pallid sky
like Greer Garson on the Cliffs of Dover
watching her lover's Spitfire cross the channel.
  
Geese gather in the bay.
Daily practice formations vee over 
my cottage which is even now
hunkering down into the forest.  

It pulls in its garden skirts in one last show  
of bravado with golden asters and tattered
baby's breath lace kicking high.  Wood is piled
on the porch to feed my parlor stove when

white is the colourless of the day.  My geese 
bugle and triumph in a crackle of song, " come with us,
come with us woman of the north,  Join our soaring
into the warmth of another land."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 2:00 PM
What a lovely poem this is, Patricia! You make it sound so warm and homely...as enchanting and as snug as your cosy cottage with its flowered gardens and blazing little parlour stove -- simply charming! You are blessed to live in such a place...truly you are. My very warmest regards as always, Patricia. Your friend. :) john
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September 15, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Thought I would take another look at this charming poem of yours, Patricia. Long ago I visited Canada, I had an uncle and aunt living there, both deceased, now, unfortunately -- it is an amazing country!! Over the course of several months my auntie drove my father and me from Edmonton into the surrounding breath-taking areas of Alberta and B.C...Outstanding beauty and grandeur...truly it is Gods land!! All my very best, Patricia! :) john
Cresswell Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 2:23 PM
It is just as I want it warm and inviting to all. In winter with the stove crackling and stew on the cooker Irish soda bread in the oven; it is heaven, to me. I don't know where you are but I wish this for you if you desire it. Thank you. Your friend Patricia
Emu Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Beautifully penned Patricia, sumptuous imagery, (and the geese!) kind regards, Craig
Cresswell Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:13 PM
Thank you Craig, I do love Autumn.
Rees Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Love these images, these words. "vee over my cottage", "cottage....hunkering down in the forest" Just beautiful.
Cresswell Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Peter.
Ellison Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:40 AM
WOWSERS!!!! I have been missing something! Love your stuff... will correct my omission! Jacko xxx
Cresswell Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 12:05 AM
thanks Jack!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Spellbinding write Patricia :) I'm with the geese...
Cresswell Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 11:54 PM
Okay be sure to take your sun screen. You know how we Canuks burn. OOPS meant tan.
Sergi Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Recollections of an old english movie done in great film noir style. I loved this type of poem! My deepest compliments! Please read my FILM NOIR
Cresswell Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Went immediately and read it is terrific put it into my treasure for future long nights. You know what I mean.
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