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Autumn Begins

Autumn Begins I stand on my porch eyes raised into a pallid sky like Greer Garson on the Cliffs of Dover watching her lover's Spitfire cross the channel. Geese gather in the bay. Daily practice formations vee over my cottage which is even now hunkering down into the forest. It pulls in its garden skirts in one last show of bravado with golden asters and tattered baby's breath lace kicking high. Wood is piled on the porch to feed my parlor stove when white is the colourless of the day. My geese bugle and triumph in a crackle of song, " come with us, come with us woman of the north, Join our soaring into the warmth of another land."

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Date: 9/13/2017 2:00:00 PM
What a lovely poem this is, Patricia! You make it sound so warm and homely...as enchanting and as snug as your cosy cottage with its flowered gardens and blazing little parlour stove -- simply charming! You are blessed to live in such a place...truly you are. My very warmest regards as always, Patricia. Your friend. :) john
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John Fleming
Date: 9/15/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thought I would take another look at this charming poem of yours, Patricia. Long ago I visited Canada, I had an uncle and aunt living there, both deceased, now, unfortunately -- it is an amazing country!! Over the course of several months my auntie drove my father and me from Edmonton into the surrounding breath-taking areas of Alberta and B.C...Outstanding beauty and grandeur...truly it is Gods land!! All my very best, Patricia! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/13/2017 2:23:00 PM
It is just as I want it warm and inviting to all. In winter with the stove crackling and stew on the cooker Irish soda bread in the oven; it is heaven, to me. I don't know where you are but I wish this for you if you desire it. Thank you. Your friend Patricia
Date: 9/10/2017 6:10:00 PM
Beautifully penned Patricia, sumptuous imagery, (and the geese!) kind regards, Craig
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/10/2017 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Craig, I do love Autumn.
Date: 9/7/2017 11:57:00 AM
Love these images, these words. "vee over my cottage", "cottage....hunkering down in the forest" Just beautiful.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/8/2017 12:00:00 AM
Thank you Peter.
Date: 9/7/2017 7:40:00 AM
WOWSERS!!!! I have been missing something! Love your stuff... will correct my omission! Jacko xxx
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/8/2017 12:05:00 AM
thanks Jack!
Date: 9/7/2017 7:19:00 AM
Spellbinding write Patricia :) I'm with the geese...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/7/2017 11:54:00 PM
Okay be sure to take your sun screen. You know how we Canuks burn. OOPS meant tan.
Date: 9/6/2017 8:00:00 PM
Recollections of an old english movie done in great film noir style. I loved this type of poem! My deepest compliments! Please read my FILM NOIR
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/6/2017 9:13:00 PM
Went immediately and read it is terrific put it into my treasure for future long nights. You know what I mean.

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