Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Ekphrasis

Autumn At An Automat

Autumn at an Automat
     
Austere aloofness.
Assessment approbation.
Allays apathy.

Inspired by Brian Strand’s Imagine Contest
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Automat_(painting)

Poetic Form: Ekphrasis (Art Inspired) Haiku with Alliteration.

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James Fraser October 17, 2009 at 6:11 PM Excellent piece Dane Ann, all the best in Brian's contest >> James

Elaine George October 11, 2009 at 1:10 PM Dear Dane, Wonderful combination of Haiku and Alliteration captauring th essence of the painting. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2009 at 3:38 AM It is amazing the difference that can come across from the same painting. I like the Haiku and alliteration combination. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop October 10, 2009 at 3:36 AM gonna read my soup mail now and work on it-thANKS:)

Brian Strand October 10, 2009 at 12:31 AM Nice one Dane.Thank you for your welcome comments Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown October 9, 2009 at 5:35 PM Another ~~~Excellent Haiku Dane Ann~~~. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop October 9, 2009 at 2:13 PM talented superb-Charma

Debbie Guzzi October 9, 2009 at 12:31 PM very nice! Light & Love

Jared Pickett October 9, 2009 at 11:28 AM I like your style.... I must try that brand of Haiku....Stay tuned........:JP]

Sean Kelly October 9, 2009 at 8:18 AM Is there no end to your talent , DA . A complete new form of Haiku !! Wow !! ..

Carrie Richards October 9, 2009 at 8:09 AM A wonderful depiction of this somber painting. ~ Good luck, Dane Anne! ~ Carrie