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Autumn came through darkness like thieves in the night Recalculated angle of sky's fireball Flung out a master canvas so, so bright Readjusted the thermostat to fall Touched the pumpkins just for Halloween fright He blew deadly white frost upon the pears Left them chilled ready to noisily splat As they land on rain drenched earth whose affairs Weigh it down, like so many bureaucrats Piled on a long winter's night putting on airs Just for fun!!! Written: November 29, 2020 After a long negative political battle Sponsor: Emile Pinet Contest: Quintain=Sicilian

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Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2023 10:46:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Though you say it is written for fun, it sounds a serious poem with great descriptions of the sudden changes autumn has brought in the weather!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 12/10/2020 10:37:00 AM

This is an excellent poem, my dear sister of God's inspirational grace, Sara. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message about "Autumn." The descriptive excellence is lovely. The theme of "Autumn's Radiance" stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and stay enlightened with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2020 10:41:00 AM

Joseph, Thanks for dropping by ..I haven't heard from you in a long time. Your kind review of my work is uplifting. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 12/4/2020 4:03:00 AM

I commented on this one before...but I will do again, dear Sara. This is simply beautiful! ~ Elaine

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2020 4:05:00 AM

Elaine, Thanks..SK

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2020 4:47:00 PM

I really liked your metaphors in this one. GREAT job, Sara.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/30/2020 7:39:00 PM

Just for fun?! This is the most profound 'fun' I've read in a long, long time. Delightful write, Sara. Thanks, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2020 5:02:00 AM

Gershon, Thanks for getting it. I am delighted that you dropped by. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/30/2020 9:55:00 AM

So great imagery so well created by you Sara... Autumn well described.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2020 1:09:00 PM

Anitha, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/30/2020 6:41:00 AM

Oooh i can feel it in your words, I must say i really dislike the dark months.. I am a summer child...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2020 1:05:00 PM

SO, Each season has its own special qualities like human beings. Thanks for feeling my words. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/29/2020 11:27:00 PM

I love Autumn. But I know it can be hard with its cold and rain (no snow in Mata). Lovey imagery. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2020 3:26:00 AM

Victor, I would think that your weather is somewhat tropical? We only get snow here about every ten years or so but sometimes it will come several years in a row. I have a feeling this is going to be a cold winter. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 11/29/2020 8:42:00 PM

Sure to be on the winner list, dear Sara. ~Elaine

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2020 3:19:00 AM

Elaine, Thanks for the confidence. Sara

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/29/2020 7:01:00 AM

A colourful representation of autumn, Sara!! Yes, with some hints to realities.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2020 8:19:00 AM

Newton, Yes, with some hints of reality. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2020 4:42:00 AM

Have you ever seen the rotten pears piled up under the old pear tree? Sara