Laura Leiser Poet Haiku

Autumn

fall trees sacrifice

                               blood orange leaves, nature's carpet 

                                                              over wood hewn steps






Written on 10/21/2015

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Mark Anthony Cotterman August 17, 2016 at 9:52 AM this is absolutely beatiful Laura Leiser August 18, 2016 at 2:44 PM Thank you for noticing this poem, Mark! I wrote it awhile ago:)

Suzanne Delaney December 2, 2015 at 12:19 AM Beautiful imagery: I love leaves and Fall scenes. Congratulations. SuZ

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 30, 2015 at 5:05 AM What a beauty Laura! Congrats on awesome win! Laura Leiser October 30, 2015 at 3:20 PM Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2015 at 5:08 PM very lovely, Laura. Congrats for your win. Laura Leiser October 30, 2015 at 3:20 PM Thank you, Andrea :)

Edward Ebbs October 28, 2015 at 8:26 PM Nice, congrats Laura :) Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:55 PM Thank you, Edward :)

Michael Tor October 28, 2015 at 7:07 AM Laura nice win!!!! Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:55 PM Thank you, Michael :)

Skat A October 28, 2015 at 1:19 AM Laura, Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT** Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:55 PM Thanks, Skat :)

Laura Hay October 24, 2015 at 4:32 AM Your words paint a vivid picture, well done, warm regards, LH Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:54 PM Thanks for your kind comments, Laura :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2015 at 11:48 PM - Laura, a lovely autumn haiku - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 4:18 PM I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Anne Lise! Thank you for the encouraging words :)

Theresa Cw October 21, 2015 at 11:20 PM Really loved this beauty of Autumn leaves haiku Laura.... Great luck in contest.... Theresa Laura Leiser October 21, 2015 at 11:25 PM Thank you very much, Theresa! I tried to put a unique slant in this haiku. I appreciate you stopping by to comment :)

Barbara Gorelick October 21, 2015 at 10:29 PM Just lovely...enjoyed it so much. Bg Laura Leiser October 21, 2015 at 11:24 PM Thank you, Barbara, and I'm so glad you liked it :)

CayCay Godwin October 21, 2015 at 9:34 PM Your Haiku captured me - I send luck ... CayCay Laura Leiser October 21, 2015 at 11:23 PM Thank you for your kind words, CayCay! I tried to put a unique slant to my poem.