Autumn

As the sun begins to fade Under the gradual onset of winter, Tapestries of rich colour are Unveiled as the Metamorphosis of Mother Nature begins once more.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2014 12:17:00 AM

happy 2014 Janette, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/14/2010 5:35:00 PM

a lovely verse! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 3/29/2010 1:50:00 PM

Terrific Acrostic Janette, how did i miss this one >> James

Bill Frew

Date: 3/21/2010 1:40:00 PM

very good write,thanx!

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/12/2010 12:27:00 PM

I just love nature and all it's wonders. Good poem. I've really enjoyed reading your work this morning. Ellen

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/22/2010 7:07:00 PM

Magnificent!! your choice of format, vocabulary, and description make this one of the best poems I have read in a very long time. Mac

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 12/14/2009 3:36:00 PM

This is a fantastic write! Simply fabulous!

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/12/2009 9:23:00 PM

Nice acrostic - I studied with Anna Rabinowitz at the New School - She wrote a book called Darkling which is a long acrostic - never tried to write one but I admire your talent. Matthew Anish

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 12/11/2009 4:29:00 AM

u re deep wt words.luv this acrostic dish.thanks for the congratulatory message on my featured poem.

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 12/5/2009 3:54:00 PM

Love this poem - tapestries evokes such colours.. Thank you for the comment on my poem..

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/26/2009 9:07:00 AM

My favorite season. Beautiful acrostic! Thank you for your kind congrats on my feature! love, shar

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/22/2009 2:24:00 PM

Autumn, my favorite time of year. When winter, spring and summer arrive, I'll revisit Autumn here. Great Work Janette. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/17/2009 6:27:00 PM

Beautiful feeling of Autumn in this Acrostic, Janette! Thank you for your comment on my blog:) Love, Iolanda

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 10:20:00 AM

Beautiful Acrostic Lady, Just as pretty in the fall as the beginning of spring, that's what's so amazing about the metamorphosis! Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Jay Smith

Date: 9/29/2009 9:58:00 AM

I love Acrostics, especially when they successfully define the base of which word it is written from. I love your Autumn Miss Janette. James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2009 5:54:00 AM

Love the ideas in this one. Comparing Mother Nature to a caterpillar. Keep writing. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 9/26/2009 7:56:00 AM

They are in sunshine in these parts this fall Janette.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments today

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/23/2009 6:44:00 AM

wonderful Acrostic. great you!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2009 4:08:00 AM

Janette, this is indeed a beautiful poem. I see it almost daily when I look out my windows. And then the cleanup begins. It is such a lovely time of year. Thank you for sharing this with us. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 9/23/2009 1:39:00 AM

Beautiful Acrostic. Lainie

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/22/2009 8:12:00 PM

Nice acrostic full of splendid imagery...Raul

P Sheart

Date: 9/22/2009 11:20:00 AM

Hi Janette Yes, this is such a inspiring, reflecting time of year. Your poem brings to mind such a lovely image. Right now I'm looking out my study window all I see is bronzy gold. I live in one of the most beautiful places in Alaska. We just got snow upon these majestic mountain peaks. Thanks for sharing it with us. I'll bet it's so pretty where you live too! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia