Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Notes About The Poem

for Tania Kitchin's Autumn Haiku - Set Of Three Poetry Contest

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autumn

september slips in
as asters wave in the breeze . . .
farewell to summer

october’s crisp days
mountains’ gold and crimson blaze . . .
my marveling gaze

november’s wind wails
a lone leaf scuttles away . . .
the fall’s first snow flake

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David Crandall October 10, 2024 at 8:21 PM Nice moving picture you painted with your words. I like the z sounds.

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 10, 2024 at 4:46 PM The chill beauty of the season is is well portrayed in these elegant haiku. Congratulations on your win. :)

Joseph May October 10, 2024 at 7:42 AM Nicely done Andrea, I especially like the last stanza, Congrats on your win

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2024 at 3:28 AM Back with congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Beautiful picture to go along with the work. Sara K

Len Gasun October 10, 2024 at 12:08 AM Gorgeous sets of haiku my dearest poet friend Andrea. I love them all so much and enjoyed. Congratulations on your win too! Hugs

JC Brul October 9, 2024 at 5:11 AM A lovely set of Haiku. I love how you put the months in chronological order depicting the beauty of autumn in each month. Congratulations dear Andie! A fave for me.

Tania Kitchin October 8, 2024 at 1:10 PM Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku set.

Linda Alice Fowler September 30, 2024 at 9:55 AM Love the trilogy Andrea, especially the last one! :)

Paige Hind September 27, 2024 at 3:12 PM "the fall’s first snow flake" beautiful line

John Read September 24, 2024 at 12:55 PM Autumn and spring my favourite seasons,your Haikus sum up the season perfectly Andrea.

Suzanne Delaney September 24, 2024 at 5:15 AM Lovely autumn scenes, Andrea When I think of our autumn writes now I think, Connie would be loving them for sure. Hugs, SuZ Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2024 at 9:18 AM yes, dear Connie loved the fall.

Jay Narain September 23, 2024 at 10:37 AM nice iagery.

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 23, 2024 at 6:07 AM Dear Andrea, I always love being a part of your well inked Haikus that bring Autumn to life. Perfection! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2024 at 9:18 AM thanks, Daniel.

Victor Buhagiar September 23, 2024 at 5:44 AM Excellent imagery in Autumn. You describe it so well. Best for a win. Hugs. Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2024 at 9:18 AM thanks, Victor

Valsa George September 22, 2024 at 10:33 PM Beautiful set of haikus. Autumn from its start to its glorious close. All the best Andrea.

Tom Cunningham September 22, 2024 at 8:48 PM You captured the autumn scene well Andrea, my favourite season for sure. Good luck. Tom

Jan Allison September 22, 2024 at 2:44 PM excellent string of descriptive haiku Andrea, autumn is here, the leaves are turning and i have a fleece lining my jacket now lol:-)hugs jan xx Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2024 at 4:35 PM Hi, Jan, thanks so much

Panagiota Romios September 22, 2024 at 2:18 PM Perfection is…….Andrea! Your years of excellence in poetry shine…as do the colors of autumn! Further..your years of writing…display themselves …….in the crystal clarity of the lines! A FAV, too. Pangie Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2024 at 4:35 PM wow, thanks, Pangie.

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2024 at 1:45 PM A nice colorful passing of that time of the year. It is almost on us with the nice changes that it brings. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2024 at 4:35 PM yes, I would say it's here!

nastyolives blegh September 22, 2024 at 1:01 PM Today is a day of enchanting autumn haikus ~ Pleasure reading Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2024 at 1:43 PM Thanks.