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9/18/2024 for Autumn Haiku - Set of Three Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

leaves fall and settle a grim naked tree remains a sad skeleton the sun drops early surrenders to a full moon a dread foreboding a wee shy princess she, speechless, with arms outstretched lifts a candy bag

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/22/2024 6:30:00 AM
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I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/9/2024 11:12:00 PM
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Enjoying this one again and back with congrats
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David Crandall
Date: 10/9/2024 11:30:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/8/2024 1:26:00 PM
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David, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming haiku set.
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David Crandall
Date: 10/9/2024 11:28:00 PM
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Thanks Tania!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/22/2024 7:33:00 PM
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Very well presented signs of the fall, David.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/22/2024 7:49:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea. I have to admit. Where I live now, Fall is not my favorite season. I prefer summer!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2024 1:18:00 PM
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So cute Dave. You're certainly in touch...:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/22/2024 6:14:00 PM
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No trick or treaters since I live the rural life now. When I lived in civilization, I always decorated my house and encouraged trick or treaters to stop by. I even dressed up myself! I love Halloween!
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David Crandall
Date: 9/22/2024 2:37:00 PM
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Thanks, do you get trick or treaters?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/20/2024 7:18:00 AM
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Ahhh from scenic to sweet with the lady one about a trick or treater. Well done
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David Crandall
Date: 9/20/2024 4:11:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 9/18/2024 8:28:00 PM
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It is a cute, endearing poem which is apparently consistent with the Halloween season.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/18/2024 9:31:00 PM
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Thanks Hilda, yes, but I in this retirement community there's no trick-or-treaters, unfortunately, so, no cute kids :-(
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/18/2024 7:17:00 PM
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Loved these haiku poems! My favorite is the last one! Good luck in the contest!
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David Crandall
Date: 9/18/2024 7:27:00 PM
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Thanks Karen! Oops I forgot to run the syllable counter, and it looks like I need to patch it up a bit. I also like the last one best.

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