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Autumn

Autumn's whispers, the chill so clear,
Shivering night, a brisk embrace, 
Spine tingles, as autumn draws near, 
Morning fog, mysterious space. 

Amidst shift, swap so evident, 
Autumn's whispers, the chill so clear, 
Once shy the caterpillars wrest, 
Now butterflies set to hover.

Leaves display vivid vibrant cheer, 
Fade and sway in the nature's sphere, 
Autumn's whispers, the chill so clear, 
Birds prepare to soar with the flair. 

Wandering thoughts in reflection, 
Autumn's wisdom, beauty with flair, 
Season of growth, soul's direction, 
Autumn's whispers, the chill so clear.
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Kauffman Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 12:07 PM
So many beautiful, and innovative, fall images, Jay. It has a fresh appeal - fresh as an autumn breeze! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.
George Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 9:07 PM
This is a lovely rhyming poem on Autumn. But if you have written this for the contest as Quatern, please check the form Quatern once again.....
Narain Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Thank you so much.
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Excellent work, Jay:)
Mitra Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Autumn made unique again in the words of a poet. Exquisite creation
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 12:12 PM
what an exquisite poem from start to finish i adore your chosen repeated lineit is beautiful indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
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