Autumn

leaves swirl in the wind
squirrels scurry with stuffed cheeks ~
autumn arrival

9/11/21

Contest: Bite Size poem No. 20
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith

October 1, 2021 at 1:10 PM

A wonderful Haiku "autumn" write. Now squirrels are working overtime. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Tania Kitchin

October 2, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thank you Paula!

Judy Ball

September 27, 2021 at 8:56 AM

Lovely Tania. I do love an Autumn scene and you describe this well. God Bless and Congrats. JB

Tania Kitchin

October 2, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thank you Judy!

Jan Allison

September 26, 2021 at 10:28 AM

lovely autumnal imagery .. please check your soup mail as my other mail has been returned 'unable to be delivered' xx

Tania Kitchin

October 2, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thank you Jan! hugs

Andrea Dietrich

September 16, 2021 at 4:35 PM

Very nicely done! Congrats

Tania Kitchin

September 18, 2021 at 1:37 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Sam Kauffman

September 16, 2021 at 9:21 AM

Great picture in words of strong images Tania! Your alliteration really gives that sense of "scurrying squirrels." Congratulations on your win.

Tania Kitchin

September 16, 2021 at 12:05 PM

Thank you Sam!

Christuraj Alex

September 15, 2021 at 9:21 PM

Great Haiku with beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

September 16, 2021 at 6:51 AM

Thank you!

Brian Strand

September 12, 2021 at 6:15 AM

It has Tania herabputs with nights closing in

Tania Kitchin

September 12, 2021 at 9:15 AM

Thank you Brian!

Victor Buhagiar

September 11, 2021 at 10:25 PM

We already had the first showers. With this pandemic around we must be careful. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin

September 12, 2021 at 4:44 AM

Thank you Victor, hugs!

Tom Cunningham

September 11, 2021 at 8:16 PM

Love the autumn Tania, reminds me of my dad who'd go out with a broom soon as the leaves came down, even in his eighties. Hope you're well Tom

Tania Kitchin

September 12, 2021 at 4:44 AM

A sweet memory Tom, thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

September 11, 2021 at 6:29 PM

lol…yes it is! Charming!

Tania Kitchin

September 12, 2021 at 4:45 AM

Thank you Kim!

Autumn

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