Autumn

leaves swirl in the wind squirrels scurry with stuffed cheeks ~ autumn arrival 9/11/21 Contest: Bite Size poem No. 20 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/1/2021 1:10:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku "autumn" write. Now squirrels are working overtime. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/2/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Paula!

Judy Ball

Date: 9/27/2021 8:56:00 AM

Lovely Tania. I do love an Autumn scene and you describe this well. God Bless and Congrats. JB

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/2/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Judy!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2021 10:28:00 AM

lovely autumnal imagery .. please check your soup mail as my other mail has been returned 'unable to be delivered' xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/2/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Jan! hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2021 4:35:00 PM

Very nicely done! Congrats

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/18/2021 1:37:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/16/2021 9:21:00 AM

Great picture in words of strong images Tania! Your alliteration really gives that sense of "scurrying squirrels." Congratulations on your win.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2021 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Sam!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/15/2021 9:21:00 PM

Great Haiku with beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2021 6:51:00 AM

Thank you!

Brian Strand

Date: 9/12/2021 6:15:00 AM

It has Tania herabputs with nights closing in

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/12/2021 9:15:00 AM

Thank you Brian!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2021 10:25:00 PM

We already had the first showers. With this pandemic around we must be careful. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/12/2021 4:44:00 AM

Thank you Victor, hugs!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2021 8:16:00 PM

Love the autumn Tania, reminds me of my dad who'd go out with a broom soon as the leaves came down, even in his eighties. Hope you're well Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/12/2021 4:44:00 AM

A sweet memory Tom, thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/11/2021 6:29:00 PM

lol…yes it is! Charming!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/12/2021 4:45:00 AM

Thank you Kim!