Autumn

November!  When the auburn autumn leaves
retard the tinkling brooks of Vallombrosa,
and kitchen chimneys draw the old ones closer:                         
when timid fieldmice nestle in the eaves
and oaken chests give up our longer sleeves,                             
and finer fabrics cede the game to grosser:
we close John Grisham, open Vargas LLosa:
Orion rises, and Arcturus grieves.
But sometimes there’s a gracious interlude.
Though winter waits offstage with all its lines
word-perfect, still a kind of summer shines.
The breeze feels older now, of muted mood,
not so disposed to boast its vital signs, 
inclined to amble through the golden vines. 

Sonnet composed: 10 November 2019   

New Fall Sonnets Poetry Contest 2019

Sponsored by Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Just re-read this one Michael, because I love autumn poems. You are very clever with enjambment and your metaphor of the breeze ‘ inclined to amble through the golden vines’ is a gorgeous image. SuZ
Delaney Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 6:34 AM
This one floats down as gently as any Autumn leaf. Enjoyed. SuZ
Coy Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 12:26 PM
You put it so beautifully! A fine compliment, for which I thank you. Michael
Theraven Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Michael, Glad to discover this tranquil Autumn in poem., before two worlds collided. One only 60nm in diameter. -Richard
Coy Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 3:51 AM
I want to thank you for this excellent comment (albeit late!) Michael
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