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Autumn

The wailing winds frail at summer's lush green foliage as October freckles leaves, lips gently part in rouged gasps with flesh that veers to purple like bruised peach skins, hands now age-wrinkled in brittle brown bark are webbed by twisting veins, contorted and spiralled, beneath a canopy of gilt, flecked in brass shards.But listen to wailing gnats, whining in winnowing winds that break a vocal chorus in coarse croaking that croon about past joys now faded as night descends and shades, trunks then root my corpse into life's cold clinging clay, despite the erosion of ages, crimson clouds in auburn coiffured tints fade as swallows gather shadows.

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Date: 5/15/2019 5:27:00 AM
You give new meaning to the word Poet dear one. Been a while since I read good poetry such as this, congratulations on your win, loved it.
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Brian Duffield
Date: 5/24/2019 2:28:00 PM
So kind. Thanks for the positive comments
Date: 5/14/2019 6:03:00 PM
Your beautiful poem is lush in luscious imagery and just the right amount of alliteration. The last three lines are a superb finale for an exquisite write. Congratulations, Brian, for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Duffield
Date: 5/24/2019 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for your insightful critique
Date: 5/13/2019 5:28:00 PM
Such rich metaphors in this creative piece Brian. I thought it was brilliant! Congratulations on your podium win! : )
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Date: 5/13/2019 12:32:00 PM
Gorgeous rich imagery and personification (or is it metamorphosis), stunning piece, congratulations on your win Brian.
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Date: 5/13/2019 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Brian.
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Brian Duffield
Date: 5/13/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for the positive comments

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