Autumn

The wailing winds frail at summer's lush green foliage 
as October freckles leaves, lips gently part in rouged gasps with flesh that veers to purple like bruised peach skins, hands now age-wrinkled in brittle brown bark are webbed by twisting veins,

contorted and spiralled, beneath a canopy of gilt,
flecked in brass shards.But listen to wailing gnats, 
whining in winnowing winds that break a vocal chorus
in coarse croaking that croon about past joys now faded as night descends and shades, 

trunks then root my corpse into life's cold clinging clay, despite the erosion of ages, crimson clouds in auburn coiffured tints fade as swallows gather shadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rose  Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:27 AM
You give new meaning to the word Poet dear one. Been a while since I read good poetry such as this, congratulations on your win, loved it.
Duffield Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:28 PM
So kind. Thanks for the positive comments
Ashley Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 6:03 PM
Your beautiful poem is lush in luscious imagery and just the right amount of alliteration. The last three lines are a superb finale for an exquisite write. Congratulations, Brian, for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Duffield Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Thank you for your insightful critique
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Such rich metaphors in this creative piece Brian. I thought it was brilliant! Congratulations on your podium win! : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Gorgeous rich imagery and personification (or is it metamorphosis), stunning piece, congratulations on your win Brian.
Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Brian.
Duffield Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thank you for the positive comments
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