Autumn

autumn clouds rushing in ~ sudden taste of rain Submitted on March 21, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAR 23) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on April 11, 2019

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/23/2021 11:10:00 AM

Love the visual movement of your words, Line. And your ku is so visceral like the smell of rain on dry earth! Congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2021 5:06:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated ~

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/23/2021 7:13:00 AM

Autumn is my favorite time of year. Great haiku, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2021 5:07:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2019 12:50:00 AM

You are writing these while it is SNOWING? Wow! So impressed!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2019 8:09:00 AM

It helps that it is night time and I'm not looking out the window. LOL

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2019 2:37:00 PM

love this clever haiku - thanks, loved your contest x

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2019 3:21:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jack.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/11/2019 9:57:00 AM

Very nice...I can taste the rain! BG

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2019 11:30:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Barbara.