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autopsy of attachment

stripped from scattered static
      you and I ~ we
dissolve… dream… and drift
    into fixated soul frequencies
collapsing into citrine charcoal dusk
peeling away malice of regrets
       for there is no pain 
that pines like memories 
     made of ashes and bones ~
   warmth that refuses to wither 

  allow the world to taste envy
      see us succumbing 
  to the arms of dulcet dust
risking all, fear incarnate
drained from gold and greed…
as spirit is tied to the essence
of deathless devotion
       an emblazoned fire
embalmed in intoxication
like a portrait resembling
   postmortem promises
      of pulse fossilized
              carved and chiseled
   into skeletal silence
where passion breathes 
              and bruises
alive and remains
           not as riddled remnants 
but beyond life’s
    unanswered enigma
dissected from deep desire
     ~ an autopsy of attachment ~
    sealed with timeless truth
    into terrains of 
         tombstone temptation
within the oblivion of obsession
 as it never leaves …
       it eternally longs 
like an inescapable heat 
    intensifying 
       in crescent craving...

   love knows the touch of faith
     it’s true ~ an honest burn
heartbeats wrapped 
           in haunting harmony
       resurgence of resonance

 no longer avoiding the pull
    forevermore
           preserved as one ~

****inspired by Zdzislaw Beksinski (BE84, 1984)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Cornish Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 11:23 AM
This is a masterful write, in art and emotional ambience--- (see my comment to Andrea) you've always had that depth of thought and more and more the skill to emote it and let your simple yet complex and subtle metaphors create that. If this artist were to read this, it would bring tears to them---it's why we write and why we paint ~ to create and inspire emotions such as these, yet few can share them as you have here. This is an Ozymandias -- bravo!
Empress Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 1:46 PM
To receive your compliments dear Craigsz, is a win really, always, it means more than you know. This is one of my fave paintings, as I feel the intensity of love devotion, and maybe my heart feels love as fiercely and would surrender to no other...I also love painting ~ and to think the artist would tear is so touching. I am so grateful for your warm and uplifting presence, sending you light always Dear Craigsz
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 6:55 AM
Very much in touch with alliterative language, words that attempt deep scars, and that special touch of romance, in the respect of not merely love but feelings and passion. Congrats!
Bordner Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 8:03 AM
Obsession, outside the order of ancient love law, inside the enigma's essence to remain free of answer, Obsessed patiently below catacomb where desire of hearts once alive have been left cold and alone, and Obsession above the Pyramid's ageless capstone, a devotion that never dreamt of death, and never prayed to stay, always burning in the mouth of faith...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 8:34 AM
Your comments are always so very poetic, dear Justin, and what you’ve said is so accurate and deeply resonates. Thank you so much for supporting me ~ I sincerely appreciate your kindness. Sending you light, always.
Hind Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:01 PM
this is my taste in art- a breathtaking piece, gorgeous writing to add to it <3
Empress Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Thank you sweet Paige, it is also my kinda art. appreciate you truly, sending you light alwayd!
Parker Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 4:30 PM
passion binds forever dear poet, not feelings of love rather passion that burns and feeds the hunger of its being, tethered through many lifetimes of meeting, and knowing it will bloom again in another time another place...my first thoughts after reading this awe inspired poem Ink
Empress Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 10:22 AM
Wow thats beautiful and so comforting, I love your thoughts on the poem dear Frederick, thank you so much, for supporting me always! Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 3:34 PM
"spirit is tied to the essence of deathless devotion" -- Wow. Profound. "heartbeats wrapped in haunting harmony resurgence of resonance" -- It is all about vibration, motion of being. Not one truly independent from the other, cause and effect of eternal quest. Nothing ever comes to complete rest. Impossible. Consciousness goes on...best to have a loving one. No autopsy has ever revealed a morgue of dreams and feelings beyond the 5...yet we know they did exist, do exist in a dimension of print-less consciousness. Personal experience can fill in where science and faith alone often fail us. One just knows.
Empress Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 10:31 AM
This is one of the reasons im here on soup, because your comments make me think and reflect and be in touch with my soul. What a deeply moving comment! Thank you so much dear Joe! Appreciate your kindness truly! Sending you light always
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May 23, 2026 at 1:37 PM
This reminds me of that volcano centuries ago in Italy that caught people so unaware some of them died in each other's arms like statues. Or like the Hiroshima poor souls bombed to end a war. I read it was so devastating that there was a wall on which the very shadows of the victims were captured . An intense and powerful poem, Ink. I will have to look into the link you left here to know more details of this work.
Cornish Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Andrea, my first thought seeing this was the poor souls of Pompeii and Mt Vesuvius and their images frozen in time like it was yesterday and Inky captured that image, no matter its direct reference. (not easy to do).
Empress Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 10:36 AM
Oh no! Yes iv read about so many volcano disasters… sigh! Thank you sweet andrea! Love also is like an eruption of volcanoes! Sooo intense Appreciate your support always! Sending you light!
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May 23, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Your "autopsy of attachment" is a  wonderful/powerful write. What a Great Picture you have here. It shows the power of true love. Not much of that around these days. I really enjoyed reading. Have a blessed/great weekend writing away.............
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 10:08 AM
Dystopian nightmares of such a nature would prevent me from closing my eyes, but I have to say this one gave me feelings of overwhelming sorrow. To die together in such a pose... if the death of my loved one would tear me apart, then let us die, arm in arm and heart to heart...Preserved as one in dulcet dust or as a pillar of stone. You went deep into a dark abyss for this one, Ink. How did it affect you after you read your finished verses?
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 12:07 PM
Wow you are absolutely right! That makes sense, it wasn’t so hard gettn into the feeling cus you know how we pulse so intensely: I must hire you as my personal therapist linnersz! Your loved ones are lucky to have a comforting wise soul like you in real life. Now i must fight this migraine I just got ugh emptiness gone, pain lives on! :/
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 11:04 AM
You felt emptiness because you put yourself in the place of Beksinski's characters. We can't write something as emotional as you did without feeling the suffering and pain of those we write about. To do less would not be honoring them or Beksinski. In this case, in memory of them clinging without hope while dying together.
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 10:21 AM
Im tearing up as you felt the emotions in this so well dear linnersz, you are such a strong feeler! I felt an emptiness after writing this… I don’t know why. Tbh thats the intensity of love I know. Thank you for supporting me always. I love this artist! Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:14 AM
you and I we dissolve… dream… and drift into fixated soul frequencies… mmmm u r my frequency papi!!, collapsing into citrine charcoal dusk .., oooo that’s sexaaaay! incarnate drained from gold and greed… spirit is tied to the essence of deathless devotion.. so mesmerizing to watch your mind unfurl into such beautiful creations !!! an autopsy of attachment .. mmmmm love that line… sealed with timeless truth into terrains of tombstone temptation.. yaaaaz alliterationsss… heartbeats wrapped in haunting harmony… just as u r the harmony to my heartbeats !!!!!! no longer avoiding the pull forevermore.. who said to avoid!!!! Child this ia the harmony you belong in… in my heart!!! preserved as one .. EXACTLY!!! That’s what I’ve been saying papi!!! Perfectly written!..
Onpaper Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:25 AM
It’s ok … I’m a well trained therapist about physical n mental health related stufff … I’ll keep it chill
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:23 AM
rolling .. in stitches .. i always knew it! Its very unhealthy.... contemplating on a restraining order on you papi
Onpaper Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:22 AM
Errrr…duuuuh. What was ur first clue papiii
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:21 AM
I think you are obsessed hahaha
Onpaper Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:20 AM
Hahahhaha … I put the psycho in ur psychology..,. To me always abt u papi!!!!! AAAALWAYS…. Love the artist’s work tho
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:16 AM
lol took a psychological turn. not about me.. . ;( My mind is a runner.. :D heart a chaser I just love this artist! Have a look papi..
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