Autopilot

Some days, when I wake, there’s nothing upstairs, 
Some days I’m blank and bare,
Some days when I look at myself in the mirror, 
All I see is a dry empty stare.

And all I can do is what I do every day, 
Automate my morning routine,
Have a shave, wash my face, then get dressed for work, 
And do it all like a machine,

Through the whole morning, the same friendly words, 
Still no flash light up in my head,
Like a robotic pilot just doing my thing, 
While upstairs I feel like I’m dead.

Some days, in the morning, I can’t think for myself, 
Free will has left me alone,
Some days when I need soft velvety thoughts,
It feels like my mind’s turned to stone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Delightful read. What comes to mind is that you need a good strong cup of coffee and you'd be good as new. LOL. Always enjoys reading your poetry.
Raynes Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Thank u Line, yep, maybe even two or three strong coffees :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Hello Raynes,many mornings i have to myself on autopilot. Some mornings i am slow to get things done. have q nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Now you got me wondering.
Raynes Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 3:54 PM
thank u Darlene, i wonder how many folks have their auto pilot on during the week :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 10:12 PM
You aptly describe autopilot! Nicely done!
Raynes Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 3:53 PM
thank you Kim, :)
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