Automatic

We never think of how we breathe
Unless we’re stuck with asthma;
And who wastes thoughts on blood, unless
We’re weak and needing plasma?

We use our eyes to focus
‘Til we suddenly can’t see;
And run for tennis balls until
There’s pain inside the knee.

If things are fine, our bodies
Let us run on automatic,
But unexpected changes may make
Life a bit traumatic.

And so we switch to manual
And contemplate each move,
Until we get the hang of things
And settle in a groove.

For when our gears begin to go
We must accept the fact
That no one gets through life with all
Their body parts intact.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Let's hope you always have the skill. And it never goes if you are ill. I'm quite adicted to your quill. Like laughter, it's better than any pill.
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:39 AM
so true so true, things they don't tell you in school!!! then you can't believe the weird things going wrong with you later in life. I really like this one.
Hicks Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 11:50 PM
Wow, so much wisdom here! It's all to easy to get cozy in our daily routines... until the unexpected happens and ruins our expectations! A much more elegant way of saying, "No pain, no gain!". Excellent!
Manassian Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Ilene...how TRUE..superb write!!!! I'm a hypochondriac ....unfortunately, I think of these things all the time...:-( Great write!!!!
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