Robert Pettit Poet Ottava rima

Australian Cutie

I have met the sweetest little wonder.
I am feeling so wonderful and loose.
This little cutie comes from down under.
She’s like a golden egg laid by a goose.
I can endure the lightning and thunder.
Hold the vodka, give me plain orange juice.
Don’t stifle this feeling.  Just let it grow.
To Australia is where I shall go.

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Lizanne Scholtz January 16, 2012 at 8:44 PM This is lovely Robert, Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth

Ralph Taylor January 16, 2012 at 6:15 PM Congrats, Bob. Awesome. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

Bob Quigley January 16, 2012 at 2:42 PM Bon Voyage Robert. You'll love Australia.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2012 at 11:04 PM HI ROBERT., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 15, 2012 at 8:11 PM congrats Robert on another amazing well deserved winning piece luv..

Leokadia Durmaj January 10, 2011 at 8:21 PM This Cutie from down under has some thinking to do....unbeknown to her, she is creating thunder and lightning to a gentleman from America....Loving storms as she does, still there are better ways to capture a heart.

James Fraser January 6, 2011 at 12:45 PM Delightful little piece Robert. Thank you for the tips to bettering my poem, much appreciated. Aye, the 'White Room' the Creme de la Cream....:)

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2011 at 5:13 PM what a cutie of a poem, Robert! And yes, that song title white room sounds familiar to me!