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Premiere Contest WinnerAurora of the Republic - 250 Years in One Breath

Written: July 3rd, 2026, for a contest sponsored by William Kelii Kekaula Quote: "One flag, one land, one heart, one hand, one nation, evermore!" — By Oliver Wendell Holmes ******************* Daybreak still cradles us in a mystic silence, and even after two hundred fifty Julys an aurora rises from the republic’s bones — akin to a beacon, a bright, breathing glow of ardor from those who once embodied freedom through flame and chime, smoke and panic. Their tremendous mettle still awaits us — their power pressed deep into silent clay, their names now whispers, scattered trinkets, woven in welkin wide and shifting blue. Ardent spirits, hemmed, swaying in darkness, yet still they marched, still they stood, liberty ringing as a resonant aria — a clear, calling lyric beyond fear. History is a palimpsest of sacrifice— a labyrinthine past we winnow for meaning. Boots once trudged through mud and frost, hands once shook with weariness, hearts once broke asunder so ours could beat freely. Yet striving rose as eternal mettle— a radiant, flawed, fiercely human glow, of devotion in a flawed generation. Modern life dazzles, vibrant and bright, bursting with creativity, freshened voices that crisscross and scan the digital sky. Freedom morphs, turns, reshapes itself — honored resilience forging fresh forms in spoken words and rising songs, coded lines and painted visions. This vibrant tapestry imbues our days, securing a steadfast civic spirit from the dust of obsolescence. We are intrepid flâneurs and inventors, carrying hope through the evolving dark, that our art, our words, our choices might herald a raw and golden century. We elicit ariose, rising expressions within the nation’s broad and shifting quilt — each chosen voice an elfin, burning ember dropped in the vast, molten story still being written by our hands. Are we willing to rise, to vow our loyalty? A solemn pledge: to love our country. Fireworks bloom as ethereal flowers tonight above sycamores and quiet roofs — not a mere vacuum simulacrum, not a fleeting, fatuous boast. But a slow requiem and sudden rebirth, a whispered wind and brilliant blaze — an eternal vow to honor the past while shaping the future with a spirited, rising manner. So let the sky turn amber, let the anthem ring mellifluous, let the wild night be ours — for we inherit not only the heavy sacrifices of those who stepped before us, but also their paradoxical legacy the truth that freedom is always becoming, always fragile, always worth the song. And now — after two hundred fifty Julys, with auroras still rising from the republic’s bones — will we dare to press onward, for another two hundred fifty more?
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MITRA Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations, Sotto, on another richly deserved Premiere win. Reading this carried me back to my years teaching at Welham Boys' School, where I introduced my pupils to the world's great national anthems. Believe you me, *God Save the Queen* and *The Star-Spangled Banner* were my favourites, and your poem awakened that same solemn lift of voice where patriotism becomes something larger than politics—a shared inheritance of memory, sacrifice, and hope. I especially admired how the anthem in your closing movement feels earned by everything before it. A magnificent tribute, stirring and deeply humane. Until the hidden music, Mohit Mitra
Anaya Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations, Sotto Poet! A wonderful 250 celebration & winner, great ending. Cheers!
Watts Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 6:14 PM
Hi Sotto What a heartfelt descriptive poem celebrating your 250 years in America. Filled with alliteration and metaphors a worthy winner From a patriotic poet Congratulations Cheers Christine
Carmack Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 7:35 AM
We'll be lucky to see another 250 months. I like the quote you included, but we have wandered far from it. Congrats on your well-deserved top placement.
Poet Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 8:16 AM
Dear Bob, thank you so much for your excellent feedback. I'm delighted that you liked my poem and quote. I share your skepticism; we simply keep hope for younger generations.
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 1:33 AM
What a fine tribute on this 250th birthday celebration. I really loved how you wrote about the fireworks there at the end!
Hind Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 10:44 PM
appropiate, Sotto, I love how you alone could write this
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 3:06 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful/powerful write. Love your line, "Fireworks bloom as ethereal flowers tonight above sycamores and quiet roofs —" So True... What a great ending. I wonder if they thought we would make 250 years??? Yet here we are. 250 more??? Only time will tell but we will not be here to see it. Happy 4th... Have a blessed day/weekend writing...............
Rolland Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 12:02 PM
wonderful tribute to fourth of July, America has build the modern era of mankind, with sacrifices ans creativity, what would be the planet in 250 years, no one can imagine, will be liberty, wars, blood or peace ? Hoping the best thanks poet
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