Aura of the Lone

An angel in pure sight, provokes the cruelest of things. 
In the depths of the night, Im toyed with by dreams. 
Baring the subliminal fight, but for what means? 
Perhaps to keep in sight, a desirable future for me. 
Only she is worth the pain, that dorments within my soul, 
but shes yet to bare name, her identities unknown. 
But who am I worthy of? A question unanswered by time. 
Who will adress me "My Love" and silence my cries. 
Who will sacrafice her night, so I may hold her near? 
Who will allow me to set light, upon her greatest of fears? 
Only the future may tell, So I will pateintly wait. 
After many attempts failed, a sane mind is at stake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/28/2014 3:53:00 PM
[Ahem] This one yo, this one...you got mad skills.Good question- who will?Left asking the same question.The power in this piece are the rhetorical questions.It really made me ask myself the same question (again, for the umpteenth time).I recall some version of that bit,"Who am I worthy of?",running through my mind pretty recently.Can't really recall when exactly.I can relate to this,that's why I find it to be mind-boggling.It's a great piece.Again,I'd like to know what inspired it
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Date: 1/21/2012 12:48:00 PM
enjoyed your piece... blessed be
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:03:00 PM
Ok, ok bare with me here. I just got back on after a while...did I win something???? Well obviously yeah..but I really wasnt expecting to win anything...well thank you everybody.
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:07:00 AM
congratulations on your win Charles.
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Date: 1/17/2012 11:29:00 AM
A beautiful,soulful poem Charles. Love Carol
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Charles. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:17:00 PM
Charles CONGRATULATIONS on this week`s winner!!!Lovely poem.-oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:55:00 PM
Charles, ... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 1/11/2012 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much. I really appreciate your comment. =)
Date: 1/10/2012 1:47:00 PM
Interesting write my friend.
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 1/11/2012 5:53:00 AM
Thank you very much. This is one reason I really enjoy writing =)
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