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Aura of Dusk

Sweet scent of magnolia permeated the air on the cusp of a balmy summer gloaming Myriads of stars would soon gleam above My garden was already dappled with light awash in the luminance of tiny fireflies Diminutive lanterns had taken wing in search of a mate or to feast on prey Dancing in circles while crickets chirped Not syncopated in rhythm, but all the same... I was enchanted with their golden glow Flickering sprites, mystical fairy creatures They lingered long after the moon had risen I dared not move in fear of chasing them away No lidded prison would hold Nature's treasures flitting in my garden in the aura of dusk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/21/2021 1:18:00 PM
I really love this enchanted poem that filled my heart with joy Lin. A fave for me! Gorgeous imagery combined with colorful descriptive words made this a favorite for me. Have a blessed holiday my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 12/21/2021 6:29:00 AM
Lin, you've crafted a stunning setting with your fantastic imagery, and it's so beautiful! Greetings and happy holidays
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Date: 12/21/2021 11:06:00 AM
I'm so happy you enjoyed it, Lasaad. Thanks!
Date: 12/21/2021 4:18:00 AM
A magical scene you have created Lin with your magical images! It just sounds totally ;over;y! Merry Christmas xxoo
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Date: 12/21/2021 4:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike. Enjoy your holiday.
Date: 12/21/2021 3:09:00 AM
The fireflies used to light little lanterns on every night. But these days they are hardly seen, I assume that the reason is air pollution . Your poem has brought before me a hundred 'flickering sprites' flitting all around me. Lovely sight, Lin
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Date: 12/21/2021 4:55:00 AM
Enjoy each one of them, Valsa, and thank you for your remarks.
Date: 12/21/2021 2:54:00 AM
I love the imagery you have used. It is a beautiful read.
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Date: 12/21/2021 4:55:00 AM
Thank you, Grace.
Date: 12/20/2021 9:00:00 AM
Ah, such wonderful images, Lin. I could smell the magnolia and other of "Nature's treasures flitting in my garden..." Good stuff, my friend.
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Date: 12/21/2021 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Milt. Magnolia and honeysuckle.
Date: 12/20/2021 7:56:00 AM
You create a stunning image of a garden at dusk Lin, a magical scene. Tom
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Date: 12/21/2021 4:53:00 AM
I'm glad you like it, Tom. Come over, sit a spell on my porch swing and have some lemonade.

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