Aura of Dusk

Sweet scent of magnolia permeated the air on the cusp of a balmy summer gloaming Myriads of stars would soon gleam above My garden was already dappled with light awash in the luminance of tiny fireflies Diminutive lanterns had taken wing in search of a mate or to feast on prey Dancing in circles while crickets chirped Not syncopated in rhythm, but all the same... I was enchanted with their golden glow Flickering sprites, mystical fairy creatures They lingered long after the moon had risen I dared not move in fear of chasing them away No lidded prison would hold Nature's treasures flitting in my garden in the aura of dusk
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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 1:18 PM
I really love this enchanted poem that filled my heart with joy Lin. A fave for me! Gorgeous imagery combined with colorful descriptive words made this a favorite for me. Have a blessed holiday my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Poet Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Lin, you've crafted a stunning setting with your fantastic imagery, and it's so beautiful! Greetings and happy holidays
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 11:06 AM
I'm so happy you enjoyed it, Lasaad. Thanks!
Gentile Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:18 AM
A magical scene you have created Lin with your magical images! It just sounds totally ;over;y! Merry Christmas xxoo
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:56 AM
Thanks so much, Mike. Enjoy your holiday.
George Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 3:09 AM
The fireflies used to light little lanterns on every night. But these days they are hardly seen, I assume that the reason is air pollution . Your poem has brought before me a hundred 'flickering sprites' flitting all around me. Lovely sight, Lin
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:55 AM
Enjoy each one of them, Valsa, and thank you for your remarks.
Daub Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 2:54 AM
I love the imagery you have used. It is a beautiful read.
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:55 AM
Thank you, Grace.
Hankins Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Ah, such wonderful images, Lin. I could smell the magnolia and other of "Nature's treasures flitting in my garden..." Good stuff, my friend.
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:54 AM
Thank you, Milt. Magnolia and honeysuckle.
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 7:56 AM
You create a stunning image of a garden at dusk Lin, a magical scene. Tom
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:53 AM
I'm glad you like it, Tom. Come over, sit a spell on my porch swing and have some lemonade.
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