Aura

Aura Luminous, invisible, radiant, color Surrounding at birth Protecting from cosmic insults Stretching with growth Becoming form fitted with each passing year Gradually shrinking and dimming with old age Dissolving at death As the soul escapes

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Ken Rone

Date: 3/23/2023 9:09:00 AM

Warren - You inspire thought and contemplation as you paint your scenes with your poetry. I am happy I found you. You keep me alert and quizzical. Best - Ken

Warren Doll
Date: 4/19/2023 10:14:00 AM

Ken, so glad that you liked it.~ Warren

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/18/2023 6:50:00 PM

Dear Warren, your poem is as inspiring as it is beautiful. The aura, an atmospheric rainbow womb within which one grows, lives, declines and dies. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 3/14/2023 9:47:00 AM

Susan, glad to hear from you. Thanks for your wonderful comments. All the best~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2022 7:49:00 AM

- A beautiful aura from a newborn, Warren ... declines with age ... yes, sad but true :) - hugs

Warren Doll
Date: 12/7/2022 8:11:00 AM

Anne-lise great to hear from you. You are right everything seems to decline with age. I guess it's just part of the aging process. Thanks for visiting, Sending a bunch of warm hugs your way~ Warren

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/4/2022 10:49:00 AM

The aura is as unique and eternal as the soul, very inspiring, Warren~

Warren Doll
Date: 12/7/2022 7:59:00 AM

Michelle, after reading your comment, I now see the aura entering the soul at death. Thanks for your comments and visit~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/25/2022 7:31:00 AM

What a perfect way to portray the Aura Warren! " Protecting from cosmic insults " is indeed so thought provoking! Well done!! Happy Friday!

Warren Doll
Date: 11/27/2022 6:26:00 AM

Hi Mike, glad you liked it. Happy Friday to you too~ Warren

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/24/2022 2:14:00 AM

Woah stellar like a halo, personality sth. Kudos for the sublime poem! ^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too"

Warren Doll
Date: 11/24/2022 3:30:00 PM

Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit~ Warren